Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
"Gender Equality", "Equal Pay", "Feminism", these are some of terms that you may have heard trending on the social media.Historically, women were not given equal rights as compared to men.They are always forced to imitate the character that society has imposed upon them.The prompt asserts that indeed man & women are physically different and thus,can't do the same tasks.Though, partially true, there are many ways to contrue this statement and dicuss upon it.I mostly disagree with this statement for the following reasons.
From ancient times, women were thought to be as caretakers of child and nothing more.As time passed women became more educated and self-aware and started fighting for their rights.Right to vote for women is an example of this.Other examples include like right to education for girl child, right to speech for women.Women started a revolution and made a better future for themselves.
Considering different fields of study, the number of women working is almost equal to that of men.Companies nowadays, are trying to make the gender ratio equal and are hiring more & more women.Even in the field of technology, there are more women programmers, engineers, analysts then ever.Women have worked hard to reach high level status in every aspect.Feminism and social media has played a major role in this.Every hastag trending has helped women to become aware of their capabilities and fight for equality.In the 21st century there are hardly any jobs that women can't do.They have shown from time to time that they are on par with men and can excel in every task that men can.
Physical tasks like machinery,labor work,drilling, any kind that causes physical exhaustion requires great amount of strength & stamina.Naturally, the women's bodies are not well suited for this type of work.Their bodies can be made compatible with thorough excercise & rigorous training but inherently we can say that there some work, women are not just suited for.
The same thing can be said for men.As we know, mothers are considered well suited for taking care of the child.During a divorce, the child is mostly given to the mother as without her the child would not be cared for properly.There are many studies done based upon this theory and all conclude that indeed motherhood is an important factor for child upbringing.
In conclusion, women are striving hard to achieve a status equal to that of men.There are indeed some work that women are suited for but still women are trying hard to cover that gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23902439024 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97279020812 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553658536585 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.03746938 60.3974514979 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 358.0 118.986275619 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.3333333333 23.4991977007 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221914158376 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120967201345 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0153914258177 0.0758088955206 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120967201345 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153914258177 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.4 14.1392134831 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.8420337079 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.1743820225 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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