Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In this issue is state about the suitability of different tasks for man & women based on their inherent physical differences . Its a very complex and contradictory issue . I disagree with that issue that state about suitability of different tasks for man & women based on their inherent physical difference which is totally conceptual thing .
We are human being not just man and women . Every man and women having capability to complete difference tasks. Actually , its partially happend our society because of the having category of work from the primitive age of civilization . peoples are taking their work separately based on gender . that's the reasons behind of physical condition of man and women . whatever in a certain period of time , we can state the things about try to explained . i think in the primitive time of starting civilization , in the time of agriculture, women are mainly working in the field , but now a days men are working in the field . that's the way difference occurs into the men and women . its depends on the working custom with time .
There are so many example of doing well both men & women altogether . like in the different game like cricket, football, olympiads, runner, and so on . These game played by both gender . so, their inherent physical differences is not the main causes to doing a task . Instead , participation and willingness is essential to doing well in any tasks .
Police , army, jobholder, business, farmers, drivers, teachers, worker and so many field , both ding well in the present condition . so, its not a big deal to became a man & women , instead, willingness and potentiality .
Different social barriers may causes for discourage any individual to doing any tasks . in this conditions , the state may true . But if not having any economical and social barrier , then approximately any significant difference can not occurs between men & women .
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276536312849 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.106145251397 0.157235817809 68% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0810055865922 0.0880659088768 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.072625698324 0.0497285424764 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0335195530726 0.0444667217837 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122905027933 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0502793296089 0.0406280797675 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86562078887 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167597765363 0.030933414821 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0977653631285 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0111731843575 0.0249443105267 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00279329608939 0.0148568991511 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1929.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 343.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62390670554 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291545189504 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227405247813 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174927113703 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122448979592 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86562078887 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431486880466 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.3987890407 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5909090909 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9885314137 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6818181818 141.124799967 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.674092028746 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 59.0 5.21349557522 1132% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.3314338723 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 2.11842105263 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413088219787 0.391690518653 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0868622028153 0.123202303941 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0648018846065 0.077325440228 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48268429879 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185193370217 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133554028805 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596156739737 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233588261352 0.385218514788 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0791741498647 0.0692045440612 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229594308245 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657351298834 0.0653680567796 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.70907079646 369% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.