Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Other than few different species, most of the animals in the nature had different genders and each gender has their specific role. This role is fixed mostly based on their evlutionary physical traits which enables one gender to perform a certain task better or exclusively. Human race is no different and divided into male and female and like all other species both men and women are better in their specific roles. In light of that evolution of nature, It can be sad unequivocally that men and women are suitable for different tasks because of the physical traits and differences.
If we focus on one of the most primary natural role of human, expanding their race, the women play one of the most vital role by carrying the baby in womb. Even after the this much progress in science the men had not able to achieve this feat. This is because of the uterus the women possess, which is not present io the men. Also, this results in close relationship between the mother and the children. This is why mothe's care is touted as the more effective than men. we can also see that most outdoor workers are men instead of women. This is because of the physical capacity shown by men which is genrally more than the women due to evolutionary cause.
As we can take a look at different ergonomical studies on physical capacity re different works on male and female. In most of the studies, in can seen that the men always showed better performance in difficult physical activities. There is significant difference in grip power, the maximum force that can be exerted, stamina, endurence etc. We can also see that, evolution has resulted in the women being smaller in physical stature. This sometimes playes as the main contributing factor in defining which works suit which gender. We can also see that their are sometimes, stark difference in the rules of different games between men's version and women's versio.
Although women are in genereal lacking in physical capabilities their are some example of exceptions too. During WW2 women took many roles normally played by men and did a very good job there. Also we have seen many valuable contribution of women in research, like madame Courrie ,reknown poet like Sofia Kamal etc. When necessary women had stepped up to fill the role of men to some extent and have made valuable contribution in the fields of knowledge and arts.
Thus we can say, that due the physical characteristics the men and women are better suited in different taks which are mainly physical based work. But, when in comes to utilizing intilligence and brain power, women have made significant contribution along with men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83039647577 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53171484222 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495594713656 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9778470291 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.347826087 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7391304348 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26086956522 5.21951772744 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209280082984 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733229158847 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505784999922 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133589563491 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017286387736 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.