The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
To start with, it is of utmost importance to clearly understand what contemporary means in this particular context. If the cultural norms are slightly tweaked or altered to accommodate the likings of the youth then that particular culture starts being contemporary. I am fully in favor of this argument and will be defending the same in the coming paragraphs.
First and foremost, in any society, usually, youth is the majority so they are in greater control of what exactly should be constituted as their cultural norms and values. They have the proclivity to challenge the older norms. Today's generation is anyway termed as "Gen Y" as they are more into computers, mobiles, and other latest technologies. They are becoming more digital now hence their preferences are also changing. They want to do more through digital means rather than human interactions. for that matter, we can take the example of banking solutions. We need not go much in the past; hardly 10 years ago, one was bound to visit a branch for any matter related to a bank. However, that has been minimized now, if not fully eliminated. One can perform all the necessary actions from the computer or mobile phone. A similar rule applies to e-commerce. People used to visit shops and malls to buy clothes and groceries. But now, through online stores and groceries, people like and purchase stuff online. They can choose stuff from a vast majority of the options compared to physically going to only one store and like whatever is available in that store. In the online store, within no time, you can view stuff from multiple merchants and vendors and choose whatever you like within your budget. Online music stores are no different. as the youth is more inclined to digital platforms and online shopping trends hence making it part of the contemporary cultural norms.
Secondly, people used to like regular tv shows and music concerts. Now the trend is changing as the youth is more inclined to reality tv shows and other forms of music. Programs like "America's got talent" and "Britain got talent" are increasingly popular among the youth and teens. These shows not only providing the youth with one more platform to showcase their talent, but only providing viewers an interesting entertainment avenue. In the music domain, Coke studios, powered by Coka Cola, is also setting up an excellent example. Various artists are invited to these shows to perform. By this, the quality of music is improving multifold. Again this is possible as the youth is taking an interest and making these shows successful.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...l means rather than human interactions. for that matter, we can take the example of...
^^^
Line 3, column 1039, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stuff'
Suggestion: to stuff
... purchase stuff online. They can choose stuff from a vast majority of the options com...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
.... Online music stores are no different. as the youth is more inclined to digital p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04398148148 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69375130292 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0401924473 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7037037037 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102836845035 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240150906683 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358340579253 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674735313161 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159594009223 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...l means rather than human interactions. for that matter, we can take the example of...
^^^
Line 3, column 1039, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stuff'
Suggestion: to stuff
... purchase stuff online. They can choose stuff from a vast majority of the options com...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
.... Online music stores are no different. as the youth is more inclined to digital p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04398148148 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69375130292 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0401924473 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7037037037 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102836845035 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240150906683 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358340579253 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674735313161 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159594009223 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.