A nation should require all of it students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
I agree with authors recommendation that nation should implement a uniform national curriculum across the schools until the students choose their interested field in college.
School is considered as the temple in my country. Where the future Country leaders, Soldiers, Scientists, Doctors, Engineers etc are nourished. As students are young, they are very keen and ready to learn any new things and gets inspired from what they learn and see. So schools plays vital role on students life.
Students won't be knowing what they are interested in or what they want to be in future. They are still in the phase of learning things and exploring the options. And they should be aware of all the choices they have which can be done by uniforming the national curriculum. Here i assumed that national
curriculum is developed in keeping the mind that it will cover most of the fields in which a student can explore. However if the national curriculum is too parochial then it will cause a major issue for the country as the students will be guided in the limited things and they might not even get a
chance to explore the options.
Many people might argue that , if a student wants to pursue his carrier say for example football , then why is he supposed to waste his time in studying the english literature to graduate the school. Yes, it seems very valid argument. If one wants to be football player , then he supposed to practice in the ground to master his skill. If he has football tournament on Tuesday which may decide his carrier , But he also have a english literature exam on Monday .So instead of practicing football he is force to spend time to read for the exam, this will directly impact his football carrier.
However, even though it seems that a particular subject is not necessary for a student who doesn't want to purse his carrier in that area. But its very much fundamental requirement for a person to know atleast basics of most common subjects. For example a person should atleast have some knowledge
about the history of their own country , he might feel its not necessary now . But in future it might require as it is the fundamental basic knowledge.
As school is the place where many of the students are exposed to many opportunities, it shouldn't be limited by narrow scope instead it should have broad culture, which i assume national curriculum will have . After exploring the various options in the school, one will have enough knowledge to choose a particular field in which they want to excel in college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79908675799 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54271822718 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481735159817 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6550710334 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231840342579 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712623144119 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730416058409 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106665535964 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869880482361 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.