a Nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education provides not only knowledge , but a correct education will also shape you to lead in a right direction and teach you how to live life throughout ones career.The prompt recommends students to study the curriculum preferred by their nation instead of their own curriculum untill they enter into college . In my opinion i strongly agree with the recommendation and education system can blindly follow the curriculum which is set by the nation untill students finishes their secondary schooling.
Toi begin , A well settled nation will always takes the quality of decisions considering all the situations , conditions of the nations and also if a nation set a curriculum it must be approved by all the educational authorities and committees and it will have the good standards of education considering ll the situations in the nation and it should must be in standard to be competitive to the world. for instance , if a nation do not have any limitations . any private organisation can have their own curriculum and they might follow their own teaching style which might effect the career of the students and sometimes the educational institutions in remote areas and are not matured enough to decide what to teach which might also be a problem for the children so it is not a big challenging factor for government to decide curriculum untill the ones secondary highschool.
Secondly , it will also indirectly helps the students to settle in their life with a proper job after their future studies , considering the nation china , japan which are most popular for electronic goods and gadgets and as we know japan is the fist nation to implement all the robotic equipment so its their nations responsibility to at least few subjects in their curriculum before entering into their colleges , by doing this it might create some interest towards electronics to the students and they can choose the same specialisation in their higher studies . similarly considering china which is one of the top country to manufacture electronic goods so it will better for china to shape their students towards telecom and mobile manufacturing industries .
secondly , A nation should not leave their young generation without know about their countries HIstory , culture , political system , geographical knowledge of their country , in these days young generation is mostly fascinating towards the international studies and leaving the value of the values of their current nation which is a one more important factor for every nation to consider and take their students in that direction.
In conclusion , it is always a nation responsibility to take care of their education system by giving a proper curriculum to their all the students in their primary and secondary schooling and it will be an indirect advantage to increase their country GDPR ratio and also it will be helpful in rescuing the nations culture and diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17197452229 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92164132916 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452229299363 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.888423457 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.666666667 118.986275619 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.3333333333 23.4991977007 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325554529302 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155233625855 0.0831039109588 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751119883289 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201712894133 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506948988183 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 14.1392134831 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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