A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Yes. I totally agree that a nation should require all of its students to study the same
national curriculum until they enter college because until a student reaches to college
he or she should learn all basics from various fields that is taught in the national
curriculum.If there not a common teaching syllabus then student may miss some
subjects which they must have aced but since they were not so appealing from their
name students may not apply for them and we may lose a brilliant student in that
particular field. For example, if Science is made optional then some people out of fear
of various scientific terms may not apply for Science and they may miss the various
Wonderful facts of our planet and basics fundamental of our body .A standard
curriculum can also belp us to evaluate students under common terms which is not
possible if there is not a common curriculum. These evaluation may help students to
examine in which field they are interested and what are their strength and weakness
In certain circumstances a common curriculum can be a boon for a students life.
Suppose a student is very good in Science and Mathematics but is facinated by Arts
and Literature so he or she may try to learn more about Arts and Literature until they
reach college and then decide whether they have to continue their further studies in
them. But if they discover that they are not so good in Arts and Literature and Maths
and Science are the subjects in which they are acing and want to further studies in
college in them, they can do so as they have learned them as a part of curriculum and
thus having a nation wide curriculum can help students to rectify their mistakes and
help them choosing the carrier they want to pursue.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this evaluation' or 'These evaluations'?
Suggestion: This evaluation; These evaluations
...le if there is not a common curriculum. These evaluation may help students to examine in which ...
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Line 13, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...a common curriculum can be a boon for a students life. Suppose a student is very good i...
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Line 20, column 15, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...a part of curriculum and thus having a nation wide curriculum can help students to rectify...
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Line 21, column 11, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to choose' or 'choose'.
Suggestion: to choose; choose
...o rectify their mistakes and help them choosing the carrier they want to pursue.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74350649351 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44486124701 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467532467532 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 23.0359550562 265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.645975758 60.3974514979 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 292.2 118.986275619 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6 23.4991977007 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410659342376 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220633580414 0.0831039109588 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174938676907 0.0758088955206 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12449636586 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137867929245 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 14.1392134831 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.2143820225 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...t is taught in the national curriculum.If there not a common teaching syllabus th...
^^
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lanet and basics fundamental of our body .A standard curriculum can also belp us ...
^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...net and basics fundamental of our body .A standard curriculum can also belp us t...
^
Line 11, column 47, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this evaluation' or 'These evaluations'?
Suggestion: This evaluation; These evaluations
...le if there is not a common curriculum. These evaluation may help students to examine in which ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...a common curriculum can be a boon for a students life. Suppose a student is very good i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 15, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...a part of curriculum and thus having a nation wide curriculum can help students to rectify...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 11, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to choose' or 'choose'.
Suggestion: to choose; choose
...o rectify their mistakes and help them choosing the carrier they want to pursue.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74350649351 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44486124701 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467532467532 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 23.0359550562 265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.645975758 60.3974514979 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 292.2 118.986275619 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6 23.4991977007 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410659342376 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220633580414 0.0831039109588 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174938676907 0.0758088955206 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12449636586 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137867929245 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 14.1392134831 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.2143820225 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.