A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is the most important part of ones life,especially the schooling is where we learn a lot of things and experience a lot of things through education and also by communicating with a lot of people.So it is required for all of the students to undergo the same learning curriculum.This one curriculum for an entire nation is important because there shouldn't be any bias as if this specific system is the best out of every curricula.So in order to avoid these things,it is indeed good to have a common system until college after which there will undergo domain specific education.
The most important reason as to bring a common education system for an entire nation is to engage students into rational a thought process that everybody is equal.If this comes into action(the system),then there will be equal opportunities for every single person in the nation.When there are different curriculum like that of the state,central,international, then as aforementioned,there will be bias.Students might feel inferior to one another.For instance,if the central education system is considered the best and the education system at the state level is parochial,then the student who's getting his education in the state level might not come forward in front of a student who's doing his shcooling at the central level.Furthermore,when the curriculum differs then the examination system would differ and the admission into college might demand different eligibility criterias.So it is better to have a common education curriculum for the fruitful outcome.
On the otherhand when there is a common curriculum for all of them,it always lies on how well the curriculum exposes the individuality of the students.Sometimes it can also be true that the students cannot be exposed to different things when they are fed the common education system unless the curriculum is the excellent.There might araise a language problem,because in a country where there are diverse languages,when the curriculum makes them learn only certain languages it might become a problem.It might become an imposition of a particular language.Sometimes certain concepts can be well understood when it is taught in their own mother tongue and in those times,it might sound for the student as if they are imposing a certain language.So the student might end up memorizing the concepts instead of properly understanding it.
To conclude,if a nation sets up the curriculum using the outsanding minds who undertands what will be required for a schooling kid to properly understand and apply every aspect of education that they undergo,there wont be any problem of imposition and every individual will be exposed to the same curriculum and so when they enter into college,every student will feel that every other individual have undergone the same education curriculum and he/she is in no way less than others.Hence there wont be any complex between the student.If it is one national curricula,then it should be the best and prove its worth.
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- A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
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- A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28870292887 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46916682113 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456066945607 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 119.0 23.0359550562 517% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.694211517 60.3974514979 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 632.0 118.986275619 531% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 119.5 23.4991977007 509% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.21951772744 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2593915279 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166487908178 0.0831039109588 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505504941309 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166487908178 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505504941309 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 63.2 14.1392134831 447% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.77 48.8420337079 -118% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 23.7 7.92365168539 299% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.9 12.1743820225 418% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.68 8.38706741573 151% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 49.6 11.2143820225 442% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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