A nation should require all of its students to study the same curriculum until they enter college

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Pre-college Courses such as school play an integral part in shaping the min...
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...l part in shaping the minds of students.It formualtes a concrete foundation,which ...
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...eing enforced uniformly across a nation.I would state two reasons to elaborate on...
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...interests more meticulously. For example,a child with great interest in military f...
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...to choose a military oriented cirriculum,such provided in military schools.This event...
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...culum,such provided in military schools.This eventually forms a perfect foundation,o...
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...is eventually forms a perfect foundation,on which the student can build his/her car...
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...ll kinds of fields would be possibility.A student failing very badly on a math te...
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...s him/her realise he should work on math,and the same student doing good in History ...
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...ng good in History would be motivated to persure history as his/her majors furthe...
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...ry as his/her majors further in college.Expose to each and every field uniformly to ev...
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...e best fit according to their interests.While it sounds all good,the factor which can...
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...their interests.While it sounds all good,the factor which cannot be ignored is age.S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, really, so, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43250688705 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39237155658 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597796143251 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 23.0359550562 260% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.673025026 60.3974514979 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.666666667 118.986275619 276% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 23.4991977007 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.21951772744 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153234486461 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734942887844 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493643143415 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823496279147 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490792515308 0.0667264976115 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 48.8420337079 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.1743820225 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.38706741573 131% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.2143820225 232% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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