A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Knowledge is an important aspect in everyone's life and gaining it in a proper sequential manner is the most crucial way to succeed in his or her future. In my opinion, I strongly agree to the situation and argue that there should always be a particular pattern of study for the students before entering their college so that they have the prerequisite knowledge required to enter a higher level(College) for the following reasons.
To begin, there is a popular maxim that the "base should be strong enough to buttress the building throughout its life". The same scenario can even be applied to the study curriculum of a student. For Instance, suppose a person is quite enthusiastic and interested in developing a game which requires the basic science to make a player move or do certain actions. However, if from the beginning of his curriculum he or she neglects the basic mathematics and physics required to understand the basic working involved between these actions, he or she might not be able to develop it correctly. Therefore it is crucial to understand the basics before moving to a higher level.
Though different people have different interests and passion in life and wants certain variations from others to succeed, but the base needs to be the same. Therefore, the nation should keep the same national curriculum until someone enters college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ht not be able to develop it correctly. Therefore it is crucial to understand the basics ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03964757709 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80260702634 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2439915655 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299183672858 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116171341554 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142713095087 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188193191182 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644806220662 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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