A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The issue whether or not a nation should require all of its students to study the analogous national curriculum untill they enter college is a contentious one. While each sides has its strength and also some weakness, I think that all of the students should study the same national curriculum because now our world is modernizing day by day and one should have all concept about different fields of national curriculum. Furthermore students should keep pace with our modern world.
First, Our students are our nations' wealth, so we should keep mind that they will be our nations' future. Now our life is technology based. If our student does not know about technology as a result they will face some difficulties in future life. To illustrate, in Bangladesh secondary school curriculum was devided by three fields, science, arts and commerce. Only science students knew about science based study. As a result arts and commerce students let behind of modern science.
Furthermore, before entering college the students should know about ethical values of society also. In a national curriculum students should be taught about social behaviour so that they would be more conscious about social necessity of a valuable person.
Some argues that, one should be expertied in only one field so that he or she will make his/her future in that field. But by following this, one will not make ameliorating life at all. In addition, while some think all national curriculum as a burden then they will not prosper in life. All students should be hard worker as a national wealth.
In conclusion, all students should be equal as a primary and secondary students before college life so that they will be equally erudite about all fields. For this reason, the all should study same curriculum before entering college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54688480741 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.985602275 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514245320666 0.243740707755 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178793179507 0.0831039109588 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175126831812 0.0758088955206 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31252321381 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159582678062 0.0667264976115 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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