A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter collage
Studying in national curriculum is the best thing for a student upto collage. Becuase school is the starting stage of every student, The stage must be advantageous to his future, Well know about their nations history, he can get well tutors in the nation for the national curriculum and its not only about gaining knowledge its also about moral values, discplines, owns country priorties and the scientists who contributed their whole lifes for national development.
School stage is the starting stage of the student he most know the basic ethical values, Moral values, and about the country history. Because, we can't find about our national history or our national moral values and our national important things if we went out for the other national curriculum. i personally know a child who came from norway , his birth place is india bute he went out for education in his childhood means from school he didn't went to indian school he didn't know anything about india. He just know baout the norway culture, festivals, and traditions. After then after many years brcause some fianacial issues he return back to india . Now , he has to study in india curriculum and his core courses are about history and geography. Now its become difficult to him to knowing about the india history and geography and he suddenly stopped studying and went into the field that he don't want study or the corse which he dont know about. major universities in USA stating that the students who complete their education system in theis national curriculum has much have faster recognistion about new things and learning things. studying in national education system always beneficial to the student even after outside of the country for further education.
Not only in the subjects related to the history or geograpic every nation has some rules and restrictions when preparing curriculum the committe has some limitations to follow to set the curriculum which is accepted by the international educational counsil. we know that and we personally experiencing that the every scientific solution has same solution in every counrty in the world if not then the country is leaving outside of the world mostly every contry has same natter in overall but differnet in stages in learing in mathematics and about science .
Even after all the some people says i want to study in the other countries in the history and geographic and mathematics or computer courses in the country but, the thing is if u learn about your country system then u can study any nations curicullum easily... i am not syaing this studies saying th
So, every student must study in their own curriculum first and then think about other national curriculum
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...learing in mathematics and about science . Even after all the some people sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, after all, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9911308204 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58301699847 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461197339246 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0349744014 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.066666667 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0666666667 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256607617924 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109140743771 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862799904036 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177077712516 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648016087563 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.