A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
National curriculum is believed to be a set of curated topics prepared by the Ministry/Body in charge of educational matters in a country. While some might be in support of all of its students taking a generalized curriculum before going for a specialisation in college, others would be in support of a student sticking to a curriculum that tallies with his desired career path before entering university. With the 2 points below, you would get to understand why I strongly want students to take a unified curriculum before gaining admission to college.
To start with, students being allowed to take shared curriculum in a country is actually for a good cause. For instance, in Nigeria. According to the educational standard followed, students across the nation use a shared curriculum for their first 9 years of academics, afterwards, they can pick a specialisation that suits their preference. During their time in college while they focus on their specialisation, a general course still gets introduced that has little or no relationship with their specialisation, but the students do perform well when examined because of their extensive background that makes it easy for them to ace test from any category tested from. Also, the shared curriculum allows the students to gather sufficient knowledge of the possible areas of specialization which further guides their career trajectory as they are already informed. When the graduates get employed, they end up to be adaptable which is a reflection of their foundation. Going by this, one can see how students being allowed to take a uniform curriculum before choosing an area of specialisation is beneficial to a nation.
Further, with a foundation of shared curriculum, it has a way of setting one for success with less input/effort. For instance, imagine if one started with a shared national curriculum and proceeded to college to specialise in becoming a Medical doctor perhaps with a reason of finding cure to diseases like HIV but later along the line discovered he has a strong interest in carrying out investigations, reports crime scenes and so on and decides to want to be a journalist. Such an individual can easily switch field based on the fact that, He/She already has a rudimentary background knowledge, a consequence of shared national curriculum. Imagine if it is one without the background knowledge, such a person will have to go a lot of years behind to begin. This can yield ugly results and it also requires more tenancity from the individual. With this, one can also see how a shared curriculum should be given priority.
In summary, if the 2 points stated are clearly looked into, one would admit that a shared curriculum would be key to preventing students from undertaking courses being imposed upon them by their parents as it would have been the case if they are not allowed to take part in a shared curriculum as many of them are likely to be undecided about the right career path to follow at such an infant stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, so, still, well, while, for instance, in summary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2506.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99203187251 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99384828764 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.269506223 60.3974514979 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.411764706 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5294117647 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221392383686 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748412833509 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453500554374 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134311151139 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468774811591 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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