A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claims is based.
I totally agree with the statement that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. The discriminated curriculum builds differences in child's development because child in state education system didn't learn communication skills classes and a child in central education system learn it successfully. On the different grounds we cannot compare two things on same parameter.
Moreover, In India there is different educational system with different curriculum followed by the schools. In any state of India there is a separate education system and there is also one central education system which provide NCERT curriculum. There is a vast difference between state and central education system's curriculum due to which students suffer a lot. If I consider myself I passed my schooling under Madhya Pradesh curriculum which runs by state. After schooling the selection process of various colleges mandatory required students passed under central curriculum. I suffered a lot due to different curriculum.
Furthermore, the schools run the curriculum according to themselves which is not up to the mark. The government applies any curriculum after research and measure benefits otherwise it would not be considered. The education before going to college is necessary because it gives overall development to a child and each child should get equal opportunity for it. For example in India the schools with enrich curriculum ask for heavy fees from students and the schools with only education ask for little fees so for low economic status people it’s difficult to pay for good curriculum.
Additionally, some parents work with government agencies and get transfer from one state to another for work. In that case the different curriculum of the schools disturbs the child's flow of study. Due to this reason the curriculum should be same in a nation. In India to avoid this problem government run Kendriya Vidhyalaya in all over the country with same curriculum. There are more than 1200 Kendriya vidhyalayas.
Finally, the aforementioned reasons support to the statement and force to same curriculum in a nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...because child in state education system didnt learn communication skills classes and ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lum due to which students suffer a lot. If I consider myself I passed my schooling...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Pradesh curriculum which runs by state. After schooling the selection process of vari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91546275113 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505847953216 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3842795033 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1052631579 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240950109978 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897304293449 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104919770165 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149460538626 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458881632027 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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