A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position
The development of the nation is dependent upon the youth of the nation, if the youth is well educated , the nation will be prosperous , on the other hand, if the youth is uneducated, the nation will be on the declivity towards darkness of many social problems like unemployment, poverty, crimes,etc. In order to educate the youth, the country must develop proper infrastructure and provide the required resources to the students to achieve success in any field they want. As the author states, it would be a good practice to give same curriculum to all the students until they reach college because there would be equality in education and the education will not be divided on the basis of money and in such conditions the meritorious students will achieve the right amount of accolades because all the students have same courses available and in the competitive exams the competition would increase. By this, the person that reaches a respectable position will have competed with very tough candidates and the nation will have great resources in terms of youth.
Firstly, if a nation applies this theory were all the student are required to study the same curriculum , there would be uniformity in the education system. All the student will have same education and they will not have any problems in going to other states for further studies , they would be able to catch up with the colleges' curriculum very quickly only because of uniformity in the preliminary education.
Secondly, currently the condition is that the state boards in india have different courses than the central board, also the level of state boards education is not great they make their curriculum on the basis of the curriculum of the central board. But they fail to include all the important things that are required in the primary and secondary education. also, the central board accredited schools are very costly , so most backward states' students go to state board school. such a thing should be abolished because this states' board students mostly only possess the perfunctory knowledge of topics and are not able to compete with the students of central board in any national level comeptitive exams.
Furthermore, when the curriculum would be same, all the students regardless of their financial condition would be able to get the high level of education.When this student will reach at the stage of working , he will have profound knowledge of education and will be able to apply that education for the betterment of the society. The world's largest democracy india has 60% of the population less than the age of 30 and so the nation's main resource is their youth and manpower. if this youth is well educated, no one could be able to stop india from being the superpower of the world.
Nevertheless, the goverment should be ready and fully prepared to follow the rules and also see if all the schools are making efforts to follow the new curriculum. The government should also provide the teachers with the required resources so to make them acquaint with the new curriculum. if the goverment fails to acknowledge that, it would be futile to change the curriculum as the teacher would not be able to teach the student itself and it would not be a very good situation for the nation.
In sum, it would be a good practice for the betterment of the nation, to have same curriculum until the colleges because it would create a sense of equality in the society and would also encourage youth to create their own path towards success by having the profound and deep erudition and not be wary of the whether the education they are perceiving is going to provide them the required results of their efforts.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 12.4196629213 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3070.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 626.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90415335463 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00199880112 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62735995808 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.396166134185 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4209235919 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.588235294 118.986275619 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8235294118 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184199663755 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810015193045 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445180234013 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121152626268 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449422359517 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.8420337079 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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