a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum before college; write a response discussing the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement and provide reasoning for which position you picked.
medical field has evolved a lot in recent times and cure is being discovered for many deadly diseases which has taken so many lifes in past. even after the tremendous evolution into this phase of medical field, many patients die out of diseases for which cure is already available. mortality rate has decreased but still there is hope of further reduction.
Once a wise man said "Where there is a will there is a way". ailing patient should have hope that they will get well treated and could come back with better health. that belief Itself will help patient to fight aganist the disease. patient should be surrounded by positive vibes and the environment should boost the patient. doctors play a vital role in the mental stability of the thier patients. Only they can explain the situation much better than anyone to patient.
there are so many fake doctors out there who pratice medicine for money and purely make that as bussiness and have very less success rate in thier carrier. Innocent people dies with treatment from this kind of doctors. even i lost my courageous grandfather because of a fake doctor who has done a mistake during a surgery made him paralysed and later took his life. later we found out that my grandfather was not the first person to lose his life to this doctors carelessness. Evenafter the avalability of cure life of a courageous man was taken away by a bad doctor. If background check of that doctor was done before surgery life of that postive charmin man could be saved by some other doctor.
before any type of treatment or surgery patients should get the record of that doctor who is treating the patient. by this fake doctors could be avoided. doctors will try to keep a clean track and mental strength of ailing patient will shoot high will inturn increase his health and mortality rate can be further reduced.
- An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition 50
- a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum before college; write a response discussing the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement and provide reasoning for which position you picked. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Medical
medical field has evolved a lot in recent times...
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... diseases which has taken so many lifes in past. even after the tremendous evolution in...
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... which has taken so many lifes in past. even after the tremendous evolution into thi...
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Suggestion: Mortality
...es for which cure is already available. mortality rate has decreased but still there is h...
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...e there is a will there is a way'. ailing patient should have hope that they will...
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...and could come back with better health. that belief Itself will help patient to figh...
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...p patient to fight aganist the disease. patient should be surrounded by positive vibes ...
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Suggestion: Doctors
... environment should boost the patient. doctors play a vital role in the mental stabili...
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...much better than anyone to patient. there are so many fake doctors out there who ...
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... medicine for money and purely make that as bussiness and have very less success ...
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Suggestion: Even
...th treatment from this kind of doctors. even i lost my courageous grandfather becaus...
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...eatment from this kind of doctors. even i lost my courageous grandfather because ...
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... because of a fake doctor who has done a mistake during a surgery made him paraly...
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Suggestion: Later
... him paralysed and later took his life. later we found out that my grandfather was no...
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Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...e first person to lose his life to this doctors carelessness. Evenafter the avalability...
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...sness. Evenafter the avalability of cure life of a courageous man was taken away...
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...enafter the avalability of cure life of a courageous man was taken away by a bad...
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...ous man was taken away by a bad doctor. If background check of that doctor was don...
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...could be saved by some other doctor. before any type of treatment or surgery patien...
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...hat doctor who is treating the patient. by this fake doctors could be avoided. doc...
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... by this fake doctors could be avoided. doctors will try to keep a clean track and ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76543209877 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37274829285 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3608458525 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07365460408 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259002714323 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283066110538 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480781998335 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192879752534 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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