A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how those examples shape your position.
Every student has right to equal oppurtunities in every field - education, sports, arts etc.Nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education in schools is basic and important that acts as base when student pursue any field. Every student in nation should know
basic math skills and national language that are required in almost every field. Without command over language, person will not be able to communicate his ideas to others. In every filed be it computer skills or sports, basic maths skills are needed.
Furthermore, there are counties where number of decent colleges is less, same national curriculum will help students in these counties to take part in college in other counties. Same national curriculam will help to analyze students based on same scale.
Moreover, students should learn social skills that will help them in life. People will argue that student should be choose subjects
according to their interest. There are some sports and intellectual prodies who have done well without following conventional route.
But at that age, child is not able to identify his interests st
To conclude,it should be mandatory for every student to study same curriculam through knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41293532338 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52661550366 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6003918812 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227482526834 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874816102392 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887641950905 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10459365306 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095294765132 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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