A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
The author here states that the nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college, and I support it as it will bring uniformity and standardization across the nation. If the nation has the same curriculum then the academic field can see tremendous growth in the years to come.
Every student having the same basic knowledge of a particular field/ subject provides fair competition in their career growth and options. Even the teachers involved in shaping their future can make out a student's interest and potential on a comparative basis and guide him/her to the right path.
But the problem arises, as to who and how the standard curriculum should be decided which benefits everyone at large? The states, as they deem fit should have the right to suggest a particular approach and a consensus must then be reached.
A student is shaped holistically with a democratic approach which later benefits the nation at large, for example, every student, in turn, is aware of the United States history and can be proud to be a citizen of the same. Having the same curriculum helps the colleges for freshman year to admit a student based on their academics as the marks then reflect the dedication and sincerity of the student and can be compared with the other fellow mates.
In the past, when students have studied what they like a level of education that could have been achieved was hampered as everyone was master in the field they like without having a basic knowledge of other options that can be explored. On having the same national curriculum the student can explore various options and then select one which interests him/her.
Federal Government should play a major role in uniformizing the curriculum and set up an education department that solves the concerns related to the same to venerate the Nation's pride.
In conclusion, I support the author on this same curriculum thought as that would ubiquitously bring about a great change in today's youth and the future standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and standardization across the nation. If the nation has the same curriculum then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 347.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95677233429 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59606036855 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512968299712 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3467456607 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 119.503703932 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 23.324526521 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415945320549 0.218282227539 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153520948141 0.0743258471296 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1588666333 0.0701772020484 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191982463454 0.128457276422 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175391733639 0.0628817314937 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.3799401198 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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