A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how those examples shape your position.
I truly believe in the right to equality, in this case, the right to have the same curriculum. Every child should be given the opportunity to learn the same thing irrespective of their location or background.
The same curriculum doesn’t imply that the student should not be given the electives to choose from. The opportunity should be same, left up to the child to groom their interest in it through proper guidance from the mentors and teachers.
The same national curriculum should be there for all, but it does have many challenges that need to be resolved for it to be possible.
Firstly, all the schools public or private should have competent teachers who can provide the students the much-needed knowledge. having the same subjects without the same level of teaching and understanding will only make it worse for the students who lack good faculty.
The secondary challenge will be the infrastructure of the school and the global reach it has, these two are very important for the overall development of the student. Extra-curricular should be encouraged from the very childhood, apart from studies the student should be trained in one or more of the activities of their choice be it sports, music, dancing etc.
The government should also play an important role in providing the scholarship to students with a low financial background. How can a poor student attend a school which has the same national curriculum, good teachers, and high fee? Even if the curriculum in all the schools is same,
it becomes impossible for a child to avail the same education, without the financial support to attend the school
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dance from the mentors and teachers. The same national curriculum should be ther...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...the students the much-needed knowledge. having the same subjects without the same leve...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01838235294 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8299726384 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525735294118 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9880927062 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.75 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199710524329 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849119607868 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440255922616 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106652719578 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527302669476 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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