Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
We humans started exploiting nature centuries ago. By the time we realize the importance the damage is already done. There are very few places on the earth that are
untouched by humans. Slowly these places are turning in tourist spots. If there are any few places left untouched by humans, its always better to keep them safe,
even if it means imposing hard rules and strict actions.
Many forests and green lands that had a proper ecosystem were destroyed. It is in the recent years that we realized the importance of every living creature
and its contribution for proper functioning of this world. Humanity had almost conquered every place in this world. The only places that are untouched could be the one's
with extreme weather or the one's that are inaccessible. The habitats of wilderness areas may be at the verge of extinction. By occupying many places on Earth, many breeds
were extinctic. One such creature is a passenger pigeon. Few years back when I was a kid, There were many no one really cared. But today, I have to show the pictures of pigeon
to the next generation. Extinctions leads to disruption in the ecosystem which ultimately or eventually leads to destruction of earth.
Not only, their habitats were destroyed, some of the worst forest fires happened due to human error. Many species dwelling on that land were killed mercilessly.
There is recent incident happened near California, that huge forest fire has caused because of a gender reveal party. We have no idea how many forest fires occurred
with the ignorance of humans. Given all of these acts of humans, its safe to say that we are lucky that at least a few places remained untouched and its important that we preserve them.
Also, By protecting wilderness places, we will be able to compare the damage done in human habitats and there is a chance to make plans to rectify them to some extent.
Its now the governments turn to make laws to protect them, instead of turning them into tourists spots. As every travelers gets excited by the thought of travelling to
places that are still intact. Tourism as much as it creates revenue, damages the place also. The only threat to such places is the its beauty which attracts travelers,
hence damaging the very few purest places present on Earth.
To culminate, Nature is the greatest gift god has given, If we protect nature, it will protect us. As it is said, Better late than never, Its time that we conserve places
that are untouched and compare the damages we made. This way we will be able to rectify them to some extent, and can make earth a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re very few places on the earth that are untouched by humans. Slowly these places...
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Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ny few places left untouched by humans, its always better to keep them safe, even ...
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Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces that are untouched could be the ones with extreme weather or the ones that ar...
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Line 12, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e no idea how many forest fires occurred with the ignorance of humans. Given all ...
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Line 16, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ad of turning them into tourists spots. As every travelers gets excited by the tho...
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Line 17, column 88, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s it creates revenue, damages the place also. The only threat to such places is the ...
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Line 17, column 128, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...also. The only threat to such places is the its beauty which attracts travelers, henc...
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Line 17, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the its beauty which attracts travelers, hence damaging the very few purest place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, so, still, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43099178283 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503296703297 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5914935869 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6785714286 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836714176157 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226584807046 0.0831039109588 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369501018305 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0279359646102 0.150359130593 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284396765403 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.