People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
The author claims that behavior is mainly a result of circumstances around us, rather than our own making. 'Behavior' has a plethora of different definitions and meanings.
Although every one has a story of difficult situations, response to such situations is in our hands. Accepting a situation and molding it make us much stronger and positive.
Our approach to different situations is what defines our behavior. I firmly state that situations do impact us, and what we do to get out of such situations define us.
Many students face with similar situations like bullying at school. Everyone handles it differently, some students face the bullies strongly and teaches them a lesson, while
other students get depressed and few might ignore them and carryon with their life. So life throws situations that are unpleasant and difficult. But if we are able to approach
it in a positive way, our outlook towards life will be changed. The output will surprise us and the people around us.
Another incident of two orphan brothers, whose parent died in an accident. Both of them faced tough situations to survive in a society without any support and money.
No one were ready to give them food and shelter, Elder brother thought solution to this would be to study and go on a proper job. While the younger one got really angry
with the society and started robbing them. We can see two different approaches to the same problem. one of them thought of a long term solution and the other got carried
away by emotions and opts for short term solution. Given, such situations we see every day, we can say that our fate is in out hands. behaving impulsively and acting
irrational does more harm in the long run.
We as humans can hear and absorb everything. External factors though has impact on us, we are the most intelligent beings on this earth. We have a capability to think
and react to situations. Despite having all these virtues, we hear many inhuman incidents around us like sexual assault, murders and the most heinous crimes.
There is no one or situations to blame for such incidents except for the person who committed the crime.
Having said of all this, there will be some situations that force us to behave in certain ways to protect ourselves. When such situation arise, there is nothing that
can be done other than blaming the situation. Hence, there are some situation that we cannot avoid and act positively.
So I cannot completely deny the fact that situation forces us to act in a certain way.
To conclude, There are outliers for every scenario, and we cannot completely deny the fact the situations and surroundings have impact on people. Though we are under
the pressure of external forces, its only reasonable to think and act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...s. Accepting a situation and molding it make us much stronger and positive. Our app...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: little might
...while other students get depressed and few might ignore them and carryon with their life...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ult. But if we are able to approach it in a positive way, our outlook towards life will be chang...
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...hanged. The output will surprise us and the people around us. Another incident of two orphan brot...
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.... While the younger one got really angry with the society and started robbing the...
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...fferent approaches to the same problem. one of them thought of a long term solution...
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... term solution and the other got carried away by emotions and opts for short term...
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...t hands. behaving impulsively and acting irrational does more harm in the long ru...
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...h situation arise, there is nothing that can be done other than blaming the situa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87526427061 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57064717871 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524312896406 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.840107364 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8666666667 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7666666667 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060941336668 0.243740707755 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176280209873 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313169514353 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0202732996482 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337242513132 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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