Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Wilderness areas implies the natural forests or jungle, with lots of flora and fauna. I agree with the above statement that to preserve these wilderness areas in the natural state, the government should amend laws. Even if those areas could be developed for the economic advantage such areas should be preserved because there is nothing which can be taken above the environment.
The wild jungles or deep forest constitutes of many flora and fauna, which are contributing in the ecosystem. Moreover, ecosystem is the reason of which the living creatures in the world are surviving. The ecosystem works like, for surviving, herbivorous animal eats plants, and those herbivorous animals may the food for some carnivorous creatures while those carnivorous after the death is the food for the decomposers and so forth, this cycle repeats. This is how the ecosystem works ie, one biological constituent is depended upon another, and if the extinction of any one occurs it will definitely hamper the other life. And, nothing can be taken above the environment, because it is the one giving us life. Hence, the forest shouldn’t be destroy rather it should be preserved. Even if, the area could be enhance for the economic benefit , it should be destroy because as we pointed out how important the environment is for us and however, only few portion lands are forest due to the rapid population growth and urbanization such areas should be preserved.
Nowadays, the urbanization has caused the forest to be extinct, we rarely we see greenery. The chaotic urbanization has led us to the harsh pollution. The pollutions introduces different types of diseases which affects the health of the people. However, the pollution can be controlled by the plants. The plants uses carbon dioxide gas for the photosynthesis, which can reduces the percentage of carbon-dioxide in our environment. One need look no further than Asia, In Maldives the country has so much greenery that the country is carbon negative, which means that, the more amount of carbon dioxide is absorbed by the plants than the carbon dioxide that is being produced in environment, so that plants play vital role is controlling pollutions.
Not only the forests creates environmental balance in ecosystem, it also served for the recreational purpose. The forest are preserved and allocated as wildlife areas, national parks and so forth. And this will help for the economic gain, people often like adventures, want to explore different flora and fauna and these type of national parks and wildlife reserve are the best place for the making people informed about different types of plants and animals. Furthermore, this serve the workplace for the researchers, who often do research about the biological aspects.
For final analysis, it can be asserted that the law should be passed for preserving the remaining forest, which include different types of flora and fauna. Thinking that those are can be developed for further economic gain may enhance economy, but it will surely disturb the ecosystem and that is great loss for us as discussed above. However, these area can carry economic advantage too, without any disturbance or destroy; these area can be declared as wildlife and national parks and enhance the tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun flora seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of florae', 'lots of floras'.
Suggestion: lots of florae; lots of floras
...ies the natural forests or jungle, with lots of flora and fauna. I agree with the above state...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...ent. The wild jungles or deep forest constitutes of many flora and fauna, which are contrib...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun flora seems to be countable; consider using: 'many florae', 'many floras'.
Suggestion: many florae; many floras
...d jungles or deep forest constitutes of many flora and fauna, which are contributing in th...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... upon another, and if the extinction of any one occurs it will definitely hamper the ot...
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Line 3, column 848, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ould be enhance for the economic benefit , it should be destroy because as we poin...
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Line 3, column 864, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'destroyed'?
Suggestion: destroyed
...for the economic benefit , it should be destroy because as we pointed out how important...
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Line 3, column 894, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...should be destroy because as we pointed out how important the environment is for us...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'introduce'.
Suggestion: introduce
... to the harsh pollution. The pollutions introduces different types of diseases which affec...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'use'.
Suggestion: use
...be controlled by the plants. The plants uses carbon dioxide gas for the photosynthes...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...e gas for the photosynthesis, which can reduces the percentage of carbon-dioxide in our...
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Line 9, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...oss for us as discussed above. However, these area can carry economic advantage too, witho...
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Line 9, column 426, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...oo, without any disturbance or destroy; these area can be declared as wildlife and nationa...
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Line 9, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...national parks and enhance the tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2758.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17448405253 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76915324273 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476547842402 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 874.8 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9302855099 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.913043478 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1739130435 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5652173913 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330033206717 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953830075512 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869615625223 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209975034707 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11420456697 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.