Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Famine stricken societies seek one thing: Food. Every one of us has experienced that when we are quite hungry, we cannot think sophisticatedly and art needs some degree of sophistication, so art cannot have any value where people are hungry. Therefore the gravity of the situation makes it advisable to defund the arts to feed the people when there is no other way, as the statement above claims. However, when the situation can be tolerable, we need to empower arts to help the society in several ways.
Why art should be funded at all? First, art can feed people and offer jobs for them. Dancing...
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Comments
From where should I know that
From where should I know that a word does not exist in the English language? I could use here "in the sophisticated manner" instead of sophisticatedly, however, I saw that such an structure is defined correct in several dictionaries.
You can ignore it if you can
You can ignore it if you can find it correct in dictionaries. The vocabulary database for e-rater is limited.
Sentence: Every one of us has experienced that when we are quite hungry, we cannot think sophisticatedly and art needs some degree of sophistication, so art cannot have any value where people are hungry.
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