Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways.
it is claimed that originality not only mean the thing which is completely new but also the recreation of old ideas which are combined together in a new from.I do not completely agree with this claim.
according to me putting old ideas together in a new form cannot be complete form of originality because even though the unique way has been used to create a complete new mixture of those ideas but still the small components which are those old ideas have been derived by some other people so they are not original but can't even said to be as duplicate completely as their application will be different than those original ideas,its field may be different.
To further elaborate more on this I would give an example of a movie which I recently watched.so,basically the plot of movie was how the students in college hostel bond over many things,how depression affects students etc.so when I was watching a movie I felt that it is a mixture of two another movies but completely lacked originality though there were small parts in movie which were original.but as most of the movie ideas,nearly 80% of it was derived from some other movies it felt like completely duplicate.so,my point is whenever you are creating a new thing which is derived from some other thing try not to use everything of that original old thing but try to add your own elements to make it more original.
To make it more clear I would exemplify another movies.so there are two comedy movies which I watched which have almost same plot which talks about the problems faced by people because of racism in society.Now here we will feel that those 2 movies will almost be same but surprisingly they are not.even though they have same plot but both movies touched the same topic in completely different ways so it makes them more original than previous scenario.I am not saying that this is complete originality but percentage of originality increases in this because of using only same plot not same stories.
Finally to conclude according to me originality cannot be binary like everything cannot be completely original or duplicate sometimes there can be some traits of previously invented things.If a certain idea is derived from or inspired from previously originated idea we cannot say that is is duplicate but it is partially or almost original.
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- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84924623116 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76598818492 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447236180905 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.818598616 60.3974514979 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.0 118.986275619 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.6 23.4991977007 339% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157850711025 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110044673652 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067295363444 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110044673652 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067295363444 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 14.1392134831 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 48.8420337079 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.7820224719 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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