The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author states that for the development of young people for leadership in different fields like government,industry etc they should be made aware of concept of cooperation instead of competition to make them able to succeed in that particular field.
Whatever the author states with his pure intention I partially agree with the statement.To explain my point I would give an example which inclines positively towards the statement.Suppose there is a group of people who are going to set up business well known as startup.So the success of this startup definitely depends upon the kind of bond or relationship they share with each other.if there are conflicts between their thought or they are lacking understanding among each other it will result into nothing but disastrous failure of their business.it is impossible that everybody will be on the same page but sometimes they should listen to each other's thoughts and discuss their points in order to make their startup successful.cooperation can be in different forms like helping each other in work,solving doubts,like if somebody is facing issues with their work then helping them resolve their issues.So if people behave in this manner it is definitely going to make them successfull in corresponding field.
Similarly in bank there are different sub-departments in departments like in finance department like taxation,loan,fixed deposits etc.Even thought they are different departments,to maintain the reputation,financial situation of bank they are expected to cooperate with each other which will definitely help them succeed.
now I just explained how the cooperation matter to succeed in different fields but when there are different businesses in same field like there are many e-commerce websites like Flipkart,Amazon now here if u want to maintain your position in race you really need to have that competition goal in mind which will motivate you to find out different ideas which will help you mark your position in this competition.
Another form of competition is self-competition which is the best form.Sometimes competition with other results into nothing but failure but if you want to improve your previous results then you should definitely compete with yourself.if you self compete and do not give attention to what others are doing and what their goals are it will help you to maintain your track to success.
So to conclude I'd say for the development of youth in order to make them able to lead in different fields both cooperation and competition are important concepts which need to be embedded in their mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, similarly, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31719128329 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27115149194 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496368038741 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 269.486548829 60.3974514979 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.0 118.986275619 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.8333333333 23.4991977007 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213481472394 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122350893469 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461763563603 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122350893469 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461763563603 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 14.1392134831 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.8420337079 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.1743820225 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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