The Central Plaza store owner asserts that the number of shoppers in Central Plaza are decreasing because of stakeboard and solution for this decrement is to prohibit the stakeboarding from plaza. But, I do not found both reason and solution unpersuasive. The owner is being superficial rather than punctilious on this topic.
Firstly, owner has not clearly explain exactly when the stakeboard was establish on the plaza. According to owner they are facing meager shopper since 2 years if stakeboard is just establish then they reason for less shopper might be different than what the owner has claimed. Even if the stakeboard was established before 2 years then shopper would have been less since many time ago. There might be different reason for decrement in shopper.
Secondly, owner has not been eloquent about the number of complaints from shop owner. Is it the complain from every shop? It might be the case that only few shops are facing less number of customer because of their low service and low quality of items. Or, shop owner has increased their marked piece because of less profit and customer found it irrelevant.
Thirdly, because of inflation on every items on the market, people are facing economic crisis and are unable to afford for shopping. The owner cannot be precise about the decrement of the shopper. There may be varieties of number. Even if the litter and vandalism are effecting the shopper in the plaza then owner association should find better solution than prohibiting them from plaza. They have placid talk with stakeboard and separate the area of litter and vandalism where it cannot harm the shoppers.
Thus, the owner could not provide articulate evidence about stakeboard being reason of shopper decrement. The owner must have meticulously list the reason for decrement rather than just accusing stakeboard. So, I completely disagree with the owners claim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'established'.
Suggestion: established
...explain exactly when the stakeboard was establish on the plaza. According to owner they a...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...son for less shopper might be different than what the owner has claimed. Even if the...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...er of complaints from shop owner. Is it the complain from every shop? It might be the case t...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'listed'.
Suggestion: listed
...ement. The owner must have meticulously list the reason for decrement rather than ju...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11254019293 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52510886314 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2168673943 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6842105263 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204446987229 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654834035893 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757436122383 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125505735626 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071549430684 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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