As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The thesis provided is “As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate”. Growth of an individual or organization reflects in the kind of technology it uses. I would like to express my views in detailed by providing supporting details to the opinions. Below are the points that are described elaborately.
Firstly I would like to say technology development is must for a Nation’s growth. It makes one’s life smooth and flexible. In olden days to deliver any message, people used pigeons as a source to communicate. Later they were replaced by humans. Still there is delay in the delivery. This made Scientists to invent fax machines and computers. Technology keeps on progressing and this human’s life much easy. People are able to spend some time with family.
In olden days to harvest the crop, farmers paid wages to laborers. After all expenses the net profit left out with farmers is very little since the demand for laborers is very high. This made farmers to leave the agriculture field. After the invention of machinery tools there is quite significant improvement in the profits. Even more started cultivating the crops. Another example is monitoring the state or nation’s activity. With the help of electronic devises like computer, TV etc. government is able to monitor the status of the projects and take decision without any delay.
Another simple example which anyone can notice in our day to day life is calculator. It is very difficult to calculate the complex algorithms and to get the precise output. This needs a lot of focus. Not everyone can do this. Even the efficiency of the person who does all this reduces. There are lot many complications. Calculator made our work easy. This can compute any type of operations in fraction of seconds with accuracy of almost 99%. The use of this calculator made a significant contribution in defense field. At the same time the laziness of the humans increased. People stopped using their brains. Even for the small operations they started using calculator. This make our brain to stay in idle state.
Inventions are boon to the society. But at the same time humans started depending on them even for small things. This made humans started using their brain and thoughts less efficiently. These minor things can be overridden. By doing regular practice and exercise our brain will be in healthy state. This will even more contribute to the technology development. New ideas which are being generated can be executed in an easy and quick manner.
Use of mobile phones made people to think of high rate date exchange. This lead to the invention of 3G. Now this is replaced by 4G.In future it will be 6G. For better data transmission with less power loss researches are going on. This led to the new communication. Either in defense or space or agriculture or manufacturing sector, technology made people to use their thoughts to strive for excellency.
As I have provided irrefutable evidence in support of stance, I would like to conclude my agreement by reiterating that relying more on technology does not deteriorate our thinking capability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, after all, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2691.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 534.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0393258427 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85967319566 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 873.0 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 47.0 20.2370786517 232% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9267711922 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.2553191489 118.986275619 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3617021277 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.31914893617 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 23.0 4.83258426966 476% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254944401233 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452669934789 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106809550209 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145583779382 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128360334629 0.0667264976115 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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