People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Psychologists believe that the character which a person develops is determined by two main factors, the first is genetics and the second and a greater proportion of our character traits are brought about by our environment. The prompt above opines that the character profile of human beings is determined by forces beyond the control of that individual, I believe this to be true for three cogent reasons.
Human beings are products of the society we develop in as we are social creatures we constantly learn and unlearn behaviors through interaction with one another and this in not under the control of that individual. This is the reason why culture has a massive impact on us a s humans, people from a particular region learn to do things and carry out tasks in a certain way and this is knows as culture. For instance in Nigeria there are three dominant tribes, Igbo, Yoruba and Hausa the Yorubas are highly respectful individuals as a result of the training they get as children and they carry this character well into old age and even well into their forties Yoruba children do not look their fathers in the eye. This submissive behavior is passed down from parent to child and is ossified by the environment into a character profile. The child in this case has no say in the development of this character trait of submission.
Genetics is a second major determinant of behavior of individuals as individuals show mannerisms and proclivities which can be traced to their parents even in situations where their parents are absent from the lives of these children. One widely studied area in the field of genetics amongst psychologists is the impact of parents Intelligence quotients on the intelligence quotients of their children. The effect has been downplayed over time however it is still widely accepted that the IQ of a child is dependent on the IQ of both parents. Having a high IQ predisposes you to certain inclinations, such as being an avid reader or having a love for intellectual games such as chess and scrabble. These inclinations which may turn out to be behaviors were brought about as a result of certain factors beyond the control of the child.
The place of choice is widely debated and it is claimed by some individuals that human beinhs can contrive to change certain characters as they grow older. This holds some merit but the extent to which we can change our proclivities and tastes are still dependent on the environment we find ourselves as without knowing a certain action is “wrong” as defined by society how can we ever decide it is worth changing? Society and culture which are external factors play major roles in shaping individuals and it is important that parents and governments provide suitable social environment for growing children to develop properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... why culture has a massive impact on us a s humans, people from a particular regi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90756302521 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78676529979 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474789915966 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.630287514 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.733333333 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7333333333 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143449690302 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048621701989 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328393218652 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883705295364 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275235623666 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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