People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively
Rules made by authorities are always open to an argument with having proponents as well as opposition. we as a progressive society should question the rules made by the authorities with rationale in specific situations that are delineated in the following parts.
I would like to start with an example, in India the government increased the fines to an exorbitant amount on breaking any traffic rules, even for a minor offense in order to bring order and instill fear among drivers, however this might me irking to someone who is not a repeat offender and would have to pay a huge fine for breaking the minor law just because of the authorities increased the fine because of repeat offenders.
In North Korea and places where the authorities are largely described as autocratic, the citizens should question the unreasonable impositions put on them, for instance in North Korea, citizens are oblivious about the international affairs, all and all about everything, they are shown on the internet what their government want them to see, the citizens have every right to be aware of what is going on, all the rules which questions or acts as a barrier in your basic human rights must be put under scrutiny
There are a few situations in which questioning the authority is unreasonable. for example, there are frequent cases of drug abuse that just came in the market and can have or already having adverse effects on human health like cocaine or weed do. there will be sure proponents acting against the ban of the drug for whatever twisted reasons but questioning them is not required at this instance. another example, questioning strict impositions on DUI or anything that actually is life-threatening should be avoided.
Another example would be, India just recently banned around 120 Chinese apps, few of them were games and e-commerce apps citing the reasons as for national security and data leakage/selling of the same to bidders. Few of the protestors were fighting against the game's ban but national security is of paramount importance and supersedes everything.
People should question the authorities within rationale if the impositions threatened their basic human rights, at the same time should keep in mind, not to questions the ones which are actually helping in saving lives of people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...aving proponents as well as opposition. we as a progressive society should questio...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: ALL_AND_ALL[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all in all' (=after all, nevertheless)?
Suggestion: all in all
...ivious about the international affairs, all and all about everything, they are shown on the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...stioning the authority is unreasonable. for example, there are frequent cases of dr...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
... them is not required at this instance. another example, questioning strict impositions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, still, well, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08661417323 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80451567567 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.508528185 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.8 118.986275619 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1 23.4991977007 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.21951772744 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240178777822 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973451908655 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081835194705 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128399987082 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815432425942 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...aving proponents as well as opposition. we as a progressive society should questio...
^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: ALL_AND_ALL[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all in all' (=after all, nevertheless)?
Suggestion: all in all
...ivious about the international affairs, all and all about everything, they are shown on the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...stioning the authority is unreasonable. for example, there are frequent cases of dr...
^^^
Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
... them is not required at this instance. another example, questioning strict impositions...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, still, well, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08661417323 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80451567567 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.508528185 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.8 118.986275619 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1 23.4991977007 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.21951772744 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240178777822 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973451908655 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081835194705 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128399987082 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815432425942 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.