People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the specific circumstances in which adopting the position would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
There is no question that we are reponsible for our own life, so as much as we put trust in government or authority, we must always take preventive measures and that begins by thinking critically toward rules of authority. Government of a country should make rules and authorization for the sake of the people living there, so it is only logical for the people to be aware of such things because it is directly related to their lives.
First of all, questioning the authority does necessarily means that we are disobeying and disgraceful toward government, it is the other way around. Government is not the all-knowing, so they also need people’s considerations, for the rules that they are making is for the well-being of the people. There are some governments in this world that abuse their power for their own indulgence, the only way to stop them from becoming that is by using our right and power as people of the country. For instance, in Indonesia there was a President once who created a dynasty of his own by corrupting people’s money with so may cunning ways inside the rules. Fortunately, after several years, the Indonesian people came with power and dethroned him. It was began by critical thinking and questioning all of the President’s authorizations.
Furthermore, accepting rules passively means that we simply do not care about ourselves and others in the country. It is a non-sense to let the people in power to do anything as they like, because they have responsibilities for the people, and we as people also have duty to preserve the country that we are living in. Questioning and complaining upon the rules means that we at least pay concern about what is going on in the country and try to help the country. Power of the people comes first from our voice.
Making noise toward the authorities should not be confused with a start of an uproar in the country, rather solely purposed for the benefit of the country itself. The Government can be more knowledgeable and become wiser as time gets by from the voice uttered from the people. So it is all eventually will contribute to a better country.
There are no excuses for being a silent audience concerning the rules that are being formulated by government. The country is of many elements, and we as the people is one of them. The duty to keep a good and flourishing country rests also in the hand of the people, we can start that by always aware of country’s current situation and the process behind authorizations of rules. After that, we have to be active to speak our minds upon the matter, that is the key to a healthy country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 760, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...me with power and dethroned him. It was began by critical thinking and questioning al...
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Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...an by critical thinking and questioning all of the President's authorizations. Fur...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rules'' or 'rule's'?
Suggestion: rules'; rule's
...n. Questioning and complaining upon the rules means that we at least pay concern abou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'at least', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208984375 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.162109375 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056640625 0.0880659088768 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.052734375 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.064453125 0.0444667217837 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.16015625 0.12292977631 130% => OK
Participles: 0.044921875 0.0406280797675 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87850196039 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234375 0.030933414821 76% => OK
Particles: 0.001953125 0.0016655270985 117% => OK
Determiners: 0.11328125 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013671875 0.0249443105267 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.009765625 0.0148568991511 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2638.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 458.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75982532751 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299126637555 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21615720524 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155021834061 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115720524017 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87850196039 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460698689956 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.4387517857 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1052631579 23.380412469 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1198809905 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.842105263 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1052631579 23.380412469 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.674092028746 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 45.7209836819 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.48251748252 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425172420114 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111648820193 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778662336832 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576190458524 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149717636985 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200719517908 0.161403998019 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732341019784 0.0892212321368 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.499005490131 0.385218514788 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0364951554581 0.0692045440612 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330610243891 0.275328986314 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245879369954 0.0653680567796 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.