People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Everyone has individual talents. however, it seems that some people would be not aware of their interests or capability even in adulthood. Sometimes, there is a person who wants to search for his talents. Considering this phenomenon, some people argue that society should early identify children's special talents and support them to develop their talents. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this opinion for three reasons.
First and foremost, it would be a percious opportunity for individuals to efficiently develop their talent. As is well known, most talents of humans are effectively developed at an early age. For example, many people have difficulty learning foreign languages in middle age. some of them might regret that if they start to learn a language earlier, they can speak one language fluently. A few linguists have a similar view that to learn languages, it is favorable to learn a language as early as possible. Not only languages but also diverse talents are easily developed and stimulated in childhood. therefore, if a society or a government supports a person to find their talents, they can productively make their talent superb thing in the future.
Second, it is difficult for an individual to find own talents in person. Of course, many parents consistently make an effort to know their children’s talent at an early stage. Nevertheless, people usually find their talent by chance. In this condition, a society or a government helps a person to find their capabilities like a course to find a specific interest, special talent, it would be an expedient method for an individual. For example, if one person has a talent for ice skating, he would not find their talent, even during his life, because winter sports are usually a very restricted field. however, in time, the government might manage a program to evaluate a children’s talent, he could luckily know his talent early. After 10 years, he might become a consummate ice skater, participating in the Olympic Games. In this case, without the course by the government, he would live an ordinary life although he had outstanding talent. Hence, many individuals can find their interests and develop their talent when society and a government properly earmark a budget for a course to find children’s talent.
Third, it would be a good policy for a government to develop their people’s potential talent for their nation. From a social perspective, it is very desirable to more and more people use their potential ability to the maximum since each member can contribute their society in the various spheres. For example, if people in a country have a similar interest and talent, it would be a national disaster because a society occasionally needs a professional expert. On the contrary, if many people could exert their capabilities in various spheres, their society would be more independent, autonomous space in the world. Thus, to build a more salubrious society, a government need to find and stimulate their members’ talent.
In conclusion, some people would suggest it is needless to help individuals find their talents because it needs a considerable budget to implement a program. however, when people early know their capabilities, there are various advantages not only from an individual perspective but also from a social perspective. therefore, it is desirable to make a person search for their ability by a government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2924.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 557.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24955116697 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98534206472 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436265709156 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.0 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9948809194 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.827586207 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2068965517 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.62068965517 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0742809332891 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275818111171 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315104241599 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573145719905 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247062184579 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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