People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Emotions are feelings which makes us different from machines. In fact, they are very essential because without emotions and feelings we are no less than machines that run on fuel. What makes us different from machines is that we have emotions, we can feel things like sorrow, happiness, enthusiasm. These feelings sometimes may give us a hard time when life is upset with us but also give us a time when we are thankful that we can feel such great happiness. Emotions can be observed in different ways and not only humans but all living beings have emotions. For instance, we can observe a bird feeding its young children, bringing food from different sources so that her children are not hungry.
Emotions also influence our decisions, many people make their decisions by getting influenced by emotions but this is wrong. people should not always use their emotion to take decisions, sometimes it may lead to creating chaos. For instance, if an old man dressed in meager clothes try to manipulate you into giving him a 1000$ by saying that it his current need and without it, her wife's life is at stake, one should not readily believe and give him the money derived by the rush of feelings in him towards the poor guy, he should go with him to the hospital and see for himself if he is telling the truth an then help him for his genuine concern.
However, people make rash decisions based on their emotions and later justify them by giving vague logic so as to prove that their decision was right. Getting influenced by emotions is good but making decisions solely based on your feelings without considering other factors may lead you to trouble afterward. Emotions are good like helping a cadaverous kid a slice of bread is a good decision based on emotion.
Lastly, I would like to conclude that emotions have great importance in our lives but one should not only consider emotions in making a wise decision as he/she can be a victim of deceit and can make a wrong decision by only considering his/her emotions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...fluenced by emotions but this is wrong. people should not always use their emotion to ...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...try to manipulate you into giving him a 1000$ by saying that it his current need and ...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... for himself if he is telling the truth an then help him for his genuine concern. ...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and then'?
Suggestion: and then
... for himself if he is telling the truth an then help him for his genuine concern. Ho...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ater justify them by giving vague logic so as to prove that their decision was right. Ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, may, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72881355932 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43825732651 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.4282880654 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280989069305 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115363726264 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112627429221 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199703038179 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138375426995 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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