technology has declined our thinking ability.
Technology has given us so much that we never dreamt of but it does not mean that it has doffed our thinking caps.
Sure technology has provided us with liesure ,luxury and comfort but we do not altogether rely on tech for each and every purpose of our mundane life.Moreover , we are inventors of techs and it has greatly aspired us to do more , with every new technology coming curiosity is rising among us that if this is achievable then more things are need to be explored for.
Primarily i would like to focus on the benefits technology has provided us with are like telephones- a means for communicating over large distances without personal interaction , moreover it got an advancement over the years and now we can almost do everything a computer can do on a mobile device. Further talking about more benefits of technology in are medical sciences where in history were instances that people used to die because of a small disease and people use to rely on some uncanny magic to happen and the patient gets cured on its own is now diagnosed with correct illness and treated accordingly .We can further aids of technology in schools where usually people used chalks and blackboard to teach students now use digital classrooms , Online education has provided both teachers and students a vast resource for reference.Area's of technology like internet - so easy to use and provide so much knowledge in almost every sector you can think of.
Secondarily i would to throw light on the fact that technology has made our life easier with inventions like refrigerator ,ac ,electronic gadgets.Homo-Sapiens the brightest minds on earth have invented something that would ease their problems and sometimes would be mistaken as declining their thinking ability which is not true to some extend , we can say that it may had made us lazy but making away our ability of perception and thought process is not justifiable.
Moreover technology has challenged us to do more , to come out more flourishing with its use and applications ,growing and adapting oneself for a better future.
Last but not the least i would like to close with remarks that technology has not only provided us with comfort but also has sorted out of miseries which took a toll to be solved without it and it might had made us lazy but not declined our ability to think.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83541147132 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80506005784 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523690773067 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.683972919 60.3974514979 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.0 118.986275619 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.2857142857 23.4991977007 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221373292842 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124832703608 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700774175025 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139386366603 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649257486505 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.0 14.1392134831 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 48.8420337079 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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