People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Life is filled with full of complexities from your late teen. Various levels of problems are being faced at each stage of life. Eventually solving them only take us forward in life be it correct or wrong. Hence decision making is a part and parcel of each stage of our life from which one can never escape.
Unlike other members of the Animal Kingdom, human beings tend to have more emotional quotient. Getting emotionally attached with anything and everything in one's life is inevitable. But the extent of attachment and emotional involvement is under one's control.
The fact that decision making is the most difficult part in one's life is a well known and widely accepted fact. It is an art that a person develops in his/her life over a period of time. It is a skill that is acquired. Preventing one from getting emotionally disturbed from a problem in life is highly impossible. But as mentioned decision making is something that can be controlled and shaped.
There are certain methods and ways for effecive decision making. One major step towards that is separating yourself from the problem. A point of view from a third person is always more clearer. Finding a solution based on instinct is totally different from one taking based on emotions. Emotional influence will always obscure the image and the problem which is being dealt with. Hence taking decision based on emotion will mostly lead to a misjudged conclusion.
Therfore taking decision completely based on emotion will make the problem even more complex and will lead to furthur confusions. Hence they make a poor decision maker. Taking an external support in such matters is always preferable. Justification for any problem or decision is never a solution. It is the act that is valued more than the explanation that follows.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ttached with anything and everything in ones life is inevitable. But the extent of a...
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... person develops in his/her life over a period of time. It is a skill that is acquired. Preven...
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...mostly lead to a misjudged conclusion. Therfore taking decision completely ...
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...ex and will lead to furthur confusions. Hence they make a poor decision maker. Taking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9603960396 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60705601402 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5258230644 60.3974514979 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.347826087 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1739130435 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.34782608696 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210910773985 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658108275293 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609756677749 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12398498989 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380264657205 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.