People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everyday, we are faced with a need to choose between two or more different options. While there are a few decisions we are required to make on the spur of the moment, majority of our decisions are based on analytical reasoning
Decision making, especially decisions which affect a large number of people is a complex process. Leaders in positions of authority make decisions which affect large numbers of people and have to weigh the pros and cons before they arrive at a decision. It is from this logical evaluation process that they arrive at adept decisions. While it cam be argued that some decisions need to be made as a stop-gap or in case of an emergency, this is not the norm.
Not only decisions which affect large numbers of people need to be based on logic, also, long-term decisions. Good decision makers tend to ruminate about the effects of their decisions on the long run before arriving at such a decision. For example, making a choice of a career or a life-partner, one has to transcend the current feelings of love and admiration and think about compatibility in the case of a spouse and financial security for a career. This is not to totally undermine one's emotions, as emotions will keep you going in the short term, but beyond that, logical reasoning is required for good decisions.
The best decision makers base not only their long term decisions on logic, but also their everyday decisions. An astute decision maker will consider the weather, occasion and formality in arriving at a an outfit for an event. It would not be apt to be put on clothes that will end up making you inconvenient just because you like such clothes. Occasionally, an outfit may be chosen based on emotions but such are few and far between for tactful decision makers.
Although, some may reason that emotions are required for critical decisions such as saving someone from a fire, still it is necessary to evaluate the chances of success and the chances of making it out. It would be unwise to try to save someone from a fire and getting trapped inside with the victim of the fire. It would be astute to try to put out the fire and place a call for skilled personnel to come and deal with the fire adequately.
In conclusion, great and successful decision makers such as generals of armies and chief executives of corporations base their decisions on logical reasoning majority of the time except for a few times they rely carefully on their instincts and not mere emotions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
Everyday, we are faced with a need to choose bet...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...king, especially decisions which affect a large number of people is a complex process. Leaders in...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...areer. This is not to totally undermine ones emotions, as emotions will keep you goi...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
..., occasion and formality in arriving at a an outfit for an event. It would not be...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
..., occasion and formality in arriving at a an outfit for an event. It would not be ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while, as to, except for, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6074276782 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463133640553 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8882742219 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.352941176 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341615104178 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114967359003 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685894996843 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184589313982 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406810554897 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.