People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

I very much agree with the statement. Logic and emotions are two very different aspects of dealing with a situation. People who are emotional and make decisions based on their emotions usually end up regretting. This is because one should always first analyze, understand and think through the situation rather than letting the flood of emotions take over. And I do not think it can ever even be justified with logic later on, or even if it can it would not do justice to it. To feel overwhelmed or emotional is a very natural trait but one should not let him or her be blinded from logic.

Let's consider this situation for example, if someone's loved one meets a tragedy and is murdered due to some reason. When He or she comes to know the instant feeling that will arise within his or her heart will be boiling anger and if that person lets that anger take over his or her mind and heart that persons peace will become the other persons death. Whereas if he or she learns to supress that anger and thinks the situation through with logic, keeps in mind of the possibility of the repetition of the whole scenario on other loved ones and how it could become and endless loop and decides to forgive the murderer. He or she will never regret that decision, because it was dealt with logic.

Life is all about making the right decisions, Sometimes life brings to you some really tough decisions where you become emotionally weak and you feel like to give in. But at that very point if you stay strong and convince yourself to think with logic. You will hopefully make the right decisions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, whereas, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 2260.96107784 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 287.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54355400697 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26600343704 2.78398813304 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5757387667 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216120795702 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832589976268 0.0743258471296 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962044913339 0.0701772020484 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144239454101 0.128457276422 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925093588065 0.0628817314937 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.3550499002 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.5979740519 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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