People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Human beings are emotional beings. Emotions try to control many of our day to day actions and reactions. Brain and heart are two different things and one of them tries to control the other in many situations. Many say that the best practice would be to keep your emotions separate from your decisions because your love or hatred on something could drastically affect your decision making. With this being said, I am going to put forward a few arguments which agree with the statement mentioned that decisions made based on emotions are poor decisions.
Firstly, it is very obvious that emotions might affect hugely the decisions a person makes. Extreme hatred or love on someone might make us make such bad decisions that may be very harmful in the future. For example, many people undergoing jail time due to murder are those people who have made decisions based on the excess amounts of hatred filled in their hearts. Such imprudent decision of killing another human being due to abundance of emotions controlling their decisions has landed them in jail and resulted in sorrow for their loved ones. The people who have committed these murders might justify their actions by many reasons afterwards but it still comes under the umbrella of poor decision making.
Justification for any action should come before the action is committed rather than after. It is wise to always list out the pros and cons of any huge decisions that a person takes to be a hundred percent sure that the action being committed is good for them and everyone around them. We can consider the example of someone planning on buying a house. If it is a case where someone did not have a proper shelter to live in from childhood, the prospect of buying a new house might make them every enthusiastic and emotional. They might not even consider the price of the building, the condition of the building or any such important factors that need to be considered to make a prudent decision. Hence, before committing any action, one has to have a justification for that action.
It can be argued that there are cases where a person needs to act based on emotion rather than logic in matters of family or marriage. But even it it a situation of marrying someone, it is recommended to evaluate how compatible are the two people and how happy the can live together forever. If such decisions are not made wisely and act based on emotions of love, there might be a possibility of divorces of unhappy couples and a huge burden of their children.
Finally, I'd like to conclude that though emotions try to control the major part of our decision making, it is always best to justify your decision and have a good reasoning before committing any action be it big or small.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74267782427 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47641931317 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476987447699 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1683587279 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.35 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326698924485 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994783081696 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710726653223 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190624127063 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070480508005 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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