People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a
whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations
shape your position.
Humans are social animals. We live in society and help out each other in difficult times. Attitude is
important factor in our lives. We judge other people based on their attitude. Many times we judge
people's attitudes even if we don't konw that person. But judging one's attitude based on small
interaction doesn't display one's whole attitude. It's like juding book by only it's cover. So People's
attitudes are determined by long term interaction with society as whole rather than few small interactions.
Firstly, Same situations or surroundings will yeild disparate reactions from different peoples.Few will
behave radically. other will remain calm. For example, there is road accident happened in front of people.
Some will rush to help. Some will be frozen or unable to move becuase of blood or other sudden moment
which they are unable to comprehend at that time. But that doesn't mean they are apathetic. They may
want to help but due to some other reasons they might to be able to help others. So, that's doesn't mean
other people will judge their attitudes as apathetic.
Few people has strict nature due to thier job or personality. For example, Teacher can be seen as rude
by students. Teacher scolds student for wroning doing and try to corrent them which can be seen as
rude. But that doesn't mean teacher always want to admonish them. Teacher may be benevolent and try
to help students but particular situation will represent him as different person. As security guard, His/her
job will be to question each and every person as threat. So, By judging person with few interaction will
not represnt person's attitude.
In few cases, Many people will judge other person's attitude depending on certain situtation. It can be
true that few people will have same attitude in every situtation or surrounding. As a human, we have
developed natural instinct to judge surrounding or situtation quickly which has helped us to survive in
wild. That's one of reasons why people judge other's attitude depending on situtation or surrounding. But,
they tend to change their perspective in longer run with more interactions with that person.
To summarize, People have natural tendancy to judge other's attitude in particular situtation or
surrounding but it is not alway case. One's attitude is not absolute by just few interaction but collective of
many situtations and surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... we judge peoples attitudes even if we dont konw that person. But judging ones atti...
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...f we dont konw that person. But judging ones attitude based on small interaction do...
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...es attitude based on small interaction doesnt display ones whole attitude. Its like j...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...le to comprehend at that time. But that doesnt mean they are apathetic. They may want...
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...ey might to be able to help others. So, thats doesnt mean other people will judge th...
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...ht to be able to help others. So, thats doesnt mean other people will judge their att...
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...em which can be seen as rude. But that doesnt mean teacher always want to admonish th...
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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... surrounding but it is not alway case. Ones attitude is not absolute by just few in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15051020408 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6422254682 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492346938776 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.432082881 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.3 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149249806549 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428397496037 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369478788513 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500043521797 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367613112381 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.