Some people believe that competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believe
that competition discourages those who are not athletically talented from participating in organized sports.
The contention that competition drives to perform at their best or not is much-debated one. While competition try to discourage many people from taking part in sport, it does encourage many people because of its competitive nature. Therefore, I agree with people who support competition in sport. The recommendation that not athletically talented people hesitate taking part in sport seems like prudent and judicious at first glance, but deeply contemplating on the topic, one realizes that it is specious.
every sport is competitive in nature. sport tries to encourage healthy competition between two teams or two players. For example, Cricket is called gentleman game because of its moral principals tell players to play with a healthy attitude. In contrast, If we remove the competition from any sport, an essential point of any sport is gone. Without an essential part of the sport, it merely becomes a way to physical exercise our body. Few player only love sports because of its competitive nature.
At other end, many people suggest that not athletically talented people are discouraged because of its competitive nature. At first glance, Idea make sense but closely looking it doesn't make sense. For example, we have general olympics every four years. but for disable people, we also have special olympics which is called Paralympics. In Paralympics, many disable people take happily part in it. Due to competitive nature, They also feel accomplished by winning medal in it. many sports rules were changed taking physical disablity in mind. so, Rather than thinking that competitive nature is discouraging, we can look at different sports and try to implement other strargies to tackle it.
In conclusion, different people have diverse set of opinion on competitive nature of sports. but we can not deny that competition is essential part of sport. many people enjoy and take part in organized sport because of that, so by removing it seriously weaken sports.
In conclusion,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28526645768 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84551448135 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523510971787 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7781996936 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2857142857 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268667801345 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875084225433 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885736127354 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185975306343 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943822548579 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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