People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might
not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is known to everybody that human being is a social being. Since the inception of mankind, men have been living together in groups for their mutual benefits. While living in a group or a society, it is likely for the humans to get influenced by others. However, this level of influence can be considerable up to a certain limit because it is ultimately the individuals who get to make any decision about themselves no matter how impactful the influence of others are.
People always get to choose which way to proceed in their life even after the presence of persuasion and encouragement for choosing a particular position. For instance, there are many students studying in a same class of a particular institution. The first and second student may be willing to develop their career as scientists or researchers. Undoubtedly, these two students are considered as the best by the teachers, other students and even by the parents also. It may seem, therefore, that the remaining students will also want to pursue their future career working in similar fields. However, that does not seem to happen. Even after being surrounded by such strong influence from outside, most of the students will not be cajoled to be like them.
Again, let’s consider the example of rules that one has to follow living in a society. In a certain society, it may be strictly prohibited to smoke outside in the public places. The people living in that society will continue to abide by this and may not break the rules. Nevertheless, his inner self cannot be suppressed. That same individual may start smoking as soon as he gets to a different society. In this case, the person is so inveterate that he cannot restrain himself from doing what he wants. While living in a nation, there are certain things for which punitive measures are taken. Yet there are many offenders who do quite the opposite even after knowing the stated rules clearly. Just like the earlier case, the inner choice of that individual dominates his actions.
It is however true that up to certain age, people are more influenced by the behavior of others than their own. For example, in a family, a younger child's behavior can be very much similar to the behavior of the older child. But, as they get mature, the younger one will not be like the older one any more.
Do all people living in an environment full of criminals and reprobates end up being rogues themselves? Surely, the answer is a negative. No matter how much people are bound by laws, assuaged by others or influenced by the environments, they are the ones who make their own decisions. They may choose to comply with others or may totally do the reverse. So, it is not wise and correct to say that humans are most influenced by the forces in their surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... other students and even by the parents also. It may seem, therefore, that the remai...
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Line 17, column 153, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...the answer is a negative. No matter how much people are bound by laws, assuaged by o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78556701031 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6225102065 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490721649485 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1604739526 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8928571429 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3214285714 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0907690921418 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257026537275 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322448473121 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557645637247 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225198646306 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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