People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I support the President's imposition of death sentences against suspects with known associations to terrorist groups. Violent hate groups seldom reform without a powerful incentive. Despite their hideous crimes, the Taliban members who bombed the World Trade Center in 1993 have not been executed. they are serving life sentences in us prisons and continue to spew anti-American rhetoric at our government's expense. Many suspect that the devastating attacks of September 11, 2001 were conceived and organized by these convicted prisoners. Likewise, iranian terrorists serving life sentences continue to stimulate anti-American hatred throughout the Middle East.
Opponents of the President's policy claim that convicted terrorists are sources of valuable information that they can share only if they remain alive. Yet history suggests that these terrorists would rather die that turn against their leaders. The Malaysian terrorists who bombed the American Embassy in Kabul in 1996 swallowed poison rather than negotiate with FBI investigators. Since their 1989 capture, thirty imprisoned iranian terrorists have refused to exchange information in return for a reduced sentence. Clearly, terrorists are prepared to die for their political causes and their survival offers no clear advantage to the us. Keeping terrorists alive simply gives them additional chances to hurt us.
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- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppo 16
- Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... Center in 1993 have not been executed. they are serving life sentences in us prison...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81188118812 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8049349428 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693069306931 0.4932671777 141% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2154679676 60.3974514979 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0449206922837 0.243740707755 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166561423798 0.0831039109588 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202150721858 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343444039626 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173599394969 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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