A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Person who acts against ethics and moral values is known as criminal. Criminal is a human being who breaks the ethical laws which adopted by our society. The reason for crime can be anything. It may be because of his family issues, personal issues, social issues and so on. Based on the crime he does, society should give him likewise punishment so that the criminal could be follow the normal living.
Crime can be anything. It can be a murder, burgulory, fraud, rape, etc. Since, every crime has different strength of seriousness. Crime belongs to murder, rape, etc should have been undertaken as strong crimes. Criminals related to these crimes should be banned by society itself, they won't be accepted by people. They should be punished strictly.
Crime like burgulory, frauds, etc. doesn't harm human lives. Its obvious that criminal should be punished, but their may be chances that these people can regret those things and come back as a normal person. Their is always a reason like poverty, extreme miserness which makes people to get into a crime.
There are many people who had gone through minor crimes, but finally they regret that. An Indian Actor Salman khan is one of the example. He killed one wildlife animal during his movie shooting and after that he has done many social works so that he will be regret by that way.
For any crime, firstly the society should identify the strength of the crime and with reference to that, people should take the action against that criminal. If crime is not acceptable, then that criminal should be abandon by society and if the crime is small, then society should give him another chance for being an innoccous human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y. Crime like burgulory, frauds, etc. doesnt harm human lives. Its obvious that crim...
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Suggestion: There
...hings and come back as a normal person. Their is always a reason like poverty, extrem...
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Suggestion:
...nce for being an innoccous human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, so, then, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83044982699 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2057839723 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.974204724 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.45 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145709389452 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506267819524 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314768831475 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893722914457 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318632359684 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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