The claim made here asserts that the politicians should stick to the common ground and reasonable consensus rather than elusive details. However ,i contend that the politicians should also
work on the elusive details as well as the common aspects, which forms a positive gradient in development of the nation.The points are discussed accoringly as follows:
To begin with, the politicians are the cardinals for the development of any nation,hence, for any nation to show a sign of development , the primary importance are hte human resources and they vote
to choose some leaders ,who are main objects for the road of development of the nation. The sign of development of any country is explicitly propertional to the political background there.
Therefore, the politicians are the main aspects for the country development, no matter what the financial condition of the country is. For the development of the country,
the leaders have to thing in a elusive way which is the counterclaim here. It seems reasonable because in order to be developed and to be competative in the global market
yours leaders have to be erudite and they should focus on trivial matters as well as the matters which are of lesser importance.
Let's study by one example. The US is the leader in trade,education,science,research and technology globally .This happens because they allow their research institutions
with more funding and budgets and their leaders are think in an exclusive way of country development.
One more example can be put to understand this aspect. Indians were very beackward in infracture in the last decade but after the arrival of Narendra Modi Government in india
they are very keen in the development of infrastucture i.e. they have introduced the concept of Bullet-train in india and many more Pioneering activities in india.
However, always thinking in an exclusive way is not admired because the fundings should be aptilised in the best possible way. But the politicians should urge their human resouces to use in the best way
possible for the country development. Its not always admired to think in the exclusive ways but whenever possible and situation are conducive they can goad the Research and development of the country to
propell in that direction.
In conclusion, its very necessary for the poiliticians iof the country to think in the exclusive way and also not to get detached from the main topics of the country wghich are the trivial and consensus.
so in a nutshell, bein innovative or elusive is very beneficial but you shouldn't ostracize the main aspects.
- Politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensus rather than elusive ideals.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In de 54
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17021276596 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1627551953 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.797402821 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.97078651685 322% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1708524122 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578390580216 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069880583188 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573111611512 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641267741818 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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