Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown.
Progress is an important measure of a great society. Developed countries are marked with mavericks which think out of the box and iconoclasts which shun procedures and rules, these people lead the society towards greater progress which cannot be possible if people limit their thinking to pre-explored subjects and conform to the rules of behavior inherent to a society. A great deal of opposition -- from within themselves and the out
world -- is faced by people who step out of their comfort zone and experiment with something new.
Some people may argue that deviating from defined standards leads to failures. While this may be true, greater good comes through these failures in the long run after repeated experimentation and trials, which may take a long time to lead to fruition. Despite the turmoil that marks such experimentation, when people succeed in their experimentation it leads to revolutionary discoveries and breaks existing misconceptions, leading to increased knowledge among society members. The newly acquired knowledge can then be used for the betterment of the society.
The fear that some society instils over individuals tends to discourage them. Original thinking, especially if does not match with the common views held by the society is looked down upon by other members. People are conditioned to think and act in a particular way, any deviation is marked with serious repercussions in oppressive societies. Consider some middle-eastern countries like Saudi Arabia, the women are discouraged from driving or going out in public, they are forced to dress in a particular way. Such restrictions largely inhibit the progress of the society, restriction women's independence, with women not being able to contribute to the society by taking up jobs.
Some societies give a great emphasis on following a set procedure. Schools in some countries follow a strict curriculum which discourages the students to engage himself in subjects that spike his interests. The society tries to mold students in a particular way, largely influencing their thinking. Progress cannot be achieved when all individuals are brought up in a way that they tend to belong to the same school of thought. Diversity in thinking needs to be celebrated and healthy arguments needs to be encouraged. A society can progress by adopting new, largely unexplored ideas which work for its betterment.
In summary, progress cannot occur unless we encourage people to make their own path, give them the needed assurance for trying out things outside their comfort zone. If the society lifts expectation on its members to conform to certain rules and procedures, the greater freedom can lead to a wider outlook amongst individuals. This freedom while not guaranteeing progress is certainly a catalyst for people who gain increased confidence in exploring new ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on -- from within themselves and the out world -- is faced by people who step out...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253036437247 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.184210526316 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.080971659919 0.0880659088768 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0283400809717 0.0497285424764 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0344129554656 0.0444667217837 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121457489879 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0668016194332 0.0406280797675 164% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94837508464 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0465587044534 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0101214574899 0.0016655270985 608% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971659919028 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182186234818 0.0249443105267 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0242914979757 0.0148568991511 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2863.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 454.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.30616740088 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394273127753 0.366273622748 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325991189427 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229074889868 0.200843997647 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154185022026 0.132149295362 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94837508464 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 219.290929204 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544052863436 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 64.5033351826 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.619047619 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3848664078 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.380952380952 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 54.2181665618 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.7868852459 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365966313173 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954910307404 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0609979833947 0.077325440228 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51311058981 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174768439037 0.149214159877 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132347390558 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891448284961 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2608114559 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119944777415 0.0692045440612 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235180841044 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088384068012 0.0653680567796 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.