Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown.
An unprogressing society has nothing to do with greatness, which is highly dependent on the state of individuals with that society. Greatness in a society come from the collective greatness of people living within which cannot be achieved by a miserly nature.
Many youth are focused on attaining "quick success" which involves routes and mediums that hamper a society's growth. The term "yahoo boys" is widely known as Africa and expecially Nigeria and attributed to internet fraudsters. They prey on the naiveness of individuals in their society in oder to extort money and valuables from them. Most of the fraudsters a embark on this menacing act due to self desire to want to be seen as an elite in the society. They basically hinder the growth of their society by creating disorientation and distrust amongst individual which harms a society's way of life.
Improving ones society by helping develop the next individual beside you or neighbour should be a vital goal of individuals in a society. But this is not the case as most people are selfish, only thinking about their own progress and don't care if they have to step upon that next neighbour. This selfish nature only hampers the growth of a society because a society of made up of individuals and only their colective growth and progress can lead to a progressive society.
Corruption and conflict should be highly frawned upon and any individual harboring any quality hindering the growth of a society should be delt with by laws governing the progress of that society. It is by taking actions to fight against barriers hindering a society's that individuals can actually move gradually towards a progressive society.
Some might argue that there are certain situations that affect ones way of thinking. Maybe a financial meltdown that leads someone to become an armed robbers. But this should not be the case because the societies growth should be the first thing in ones mind.
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- The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challengesfaced by the leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities 50
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 50
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 33
- Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('miserly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('nature') instead of another adjective.
...ving within which cannot be achieved by a miserly nature. Many youth are focused on attaining &...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many youths'.
Suggestion: Many youths
...annot be achieved by a miserly nature. Many youth are focused on attaining 'quick su...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ables from them. Most of the fraudsters a embark on this menacing act due to self...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ables from them. Most of the fraudsters a embark on this menacing act due to self desire...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...arms a societys way of life. Improving ones society by helping develop the next ind...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y thinking about their own progress and dont care if they have to step upon that nex...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...here are certain situations that affect ones way of thinking. Maybe a financial melt...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'robber'?
Suggestion: robber
...n that leads someone to become an armed robbers. But this should not be the case becaus...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'societies'' or 'society's'?
Suggestion: societies'; society's
...this should not be the case because the societies growth should be the first thing in one...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ies growth should be the first thing in ones mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78287238267 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5376318423 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.2 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186381515569 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665562393576 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606017182694 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117912908777 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459052527126 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.