"Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested
in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at
least some of their privacy
With a diversity of uprising industries, there are many chances for public to interact with Public figures. From actors, politicians, athletes and celebrities, all should maintain an example for younger generations, being inspirational could not only help those who struggle in life but also bring awareness into those in need.
Private could differ explanations from one another, from one’s daily routines to the relationship with their love ones, we should respect one another while having interactions with whom who shared their private side. An athlete’s daily workout routine could be as inspirational as a well-delivered speech. NBA superstar Lebron James has a stricted schedule in order to compete in the highest level. He wokes up at 0430 in the morning to start his day with a workout, hustling, striving to reach his goals, and he shares his routines with every follower on his social network. Not only could this act promote ones heathy life, but also gain the admiration of young athletes to devote their best effort to become successful.
One’s private side could remind them to help the society to build a better place. Everyone has their own roots, growing up and seeing different stories that could affect their personalities. Giving back to the general public especially the city, the neighborhood could change many people’s lives. Lebron James grew up in Akron, Ohio where he developed his characteristics to become a successful athlete. The tough environment help him to become a better person and now after he reached the highest level, he decided to give back to the community. He start a school after his famous words “ I promise “, paying full tuitions and meals for those who could afford school, wishing them to get on the right track he wished to be. The legacy he left behind has far more exceed comparing to his sacrificed privacy. We tend to look up to different figures in aspects of life, imitating learning to become the best in ourselves, but we should also have the ability to tell the difference in the influences of public figures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...their personalities. Giving back to the general public especially the city, the neighborhood c...
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...cided to give back to the community. He start a school after his famous words ' ...
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Suggestion:
...eed comparing to his sacrificed privacy. We tend to look up to different figures ...
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...nt figures in aspects of life, imitating learning to become the best in ourselves...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12753623188 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83305124805 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3364715236 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.357142857 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115528479604 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422754034906 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358173787415 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867765113466 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106566136535 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.