Reform is seldom brought about by people who are concerned with their own reputation and social standing. Those who are really in earnest about reforming a government, an educational system, or any other institution must be willing to be viewed with disdain by the rest of the world."
The issue here avers that for bringing complete reform in any field either political, educational or in any institution, one should be more determined toward the revolution desired to be made rather than concerning their own reputation and social standing. I completely agree with this assertion. Yes, Sure a revolution or any reform in any field is made if any leader is truely devoting his time and passion and becoming more diligent and ambitious about his reform or work without caring his own reputation. For any reform to be successful, one must be willing to be viewed with disdain by rest of the world and move forward with immense courage and audacity.
First, I would like to state that, the leader desiring to bring any reform must be diligent, hardworking and filled with determination. He must be willing to make reform with its inner will instead for his own sake and reputation for some time only. If so then, complete reform in any field won't be possible. For instance, the political leaders make promises during the election campaign to gain favor from the public and secure more votes for the. And after their victory, they subsequently forget their duties and start play for their own sake. And thus no complete reform is there. Also, as we follow the leaders, the leader bringing reform must be a nonpareil and exemplary one. For example, if leader in the name of reform, they involve in corruption then the reform is never possible as they followers i.e. Public copy them. Thus, no reform is possible.
Also, going back to the history, innmerable pioneers like Abraham Lincoln, Nelsan Mandela, Martin lurther king, they were seen to be much tolerating the disdain of supreme white people. Despite the fact, they move through great determination without considering their own will. And thus finally succceded in bringing the great reform and freed the nation from racism. Thus, We can see from the history also, for any reform much courage and self-righteousness is necessary instead of concerning their own reputation.
People who choose to work for their status or their own reputation in the society, they contribute partially to society. For instance, some politicians first show some useful acts and programmes in favor of the public and later on turn to like a reprobate. Thus no complete reform is made if reform is trying to be made ostentatiously.
To sum up, I would conclude that for the complete reform and revolution, one must be more determined and earnest towards their work and proceed it more audaciously even if tolerating the disdain from the rest of the world.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...om the public and secure more votes for the. And after their victory, they subsequen...
^^^^
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... and later on turn to like a reprobate. Thus no complete reform is made if reform is...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95205479452 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65729199888 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486301369863 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8015235778 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362158059968 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116990463808 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753883357743 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20575406323 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845159690618 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...om the public and secure more votes for the. And after their victory, they subsequen...
^^^^
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... and later on turn to like a reprobate. Thus no complete reform is made if reform is...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95205479452 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65729199888 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486301369863 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8015235778 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362158059968 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116990463808 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753883357743 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20575406323 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845159690618 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.