I mostly agree with the above stated statements scandals are useful to focus our attention on problem in that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Scandals are being done when someone find some loop hole in the governing system. Its every difficult for a unskilled person to find the loop hole and take the advantage of it. Only a skilled person can find out the loop hole and how to use that in one's advantage. For instant, Amazon website, initially Amazon used to give offers on the purchase of book. If you are purchasing the book you can get the 10% off on the total billed amount. So people start buying different different costly product form the amazon website, at the end they will add on cheaper book in the cart they will get the 10% discount on the over all. By this method, many people done the lacs of transaction and got benefited and saved a lot of many, and Amazon has to suffer form loss. Once, one person was caught doing this decisive method and was punished severely. As soon as Amazon got to know they fix the issue, them put in the media. By doing this action, many other e-commerce company came to know about this loop hole, and had prevented the same case happening in future. And many people got aware of this kind of mischievous activity.To overcome this kind of problem, many people came together and try to solve the issue by putting the correct policy amendment act. It was not the lesson only for the Amazon, but for all the software company. Now, Every company before making any offers they used to do some kind of brainstorm, to find some loop holes and try to correct that. and come out with clear and robust policy.
Just like above scandals there are may be many scandals which happens but we don't know. But when scandal is exposed out. Everyone put the attention on it. Many people come out with the solution and reviews how to handle the problem. Implements can get the best solution from it. Many people will learn a lesson from this, not to indulge in this kind of mischievous activity. And people who all are doing will stop it.
Some scandal are not good to get attention because people will start implementing.But the loop hole is fixed, Scandal should be exposed so that other people my not fall into same trap.
In conclusion,Scandals are useful to get to know the limitation of the governing authority.
- The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Quiot Manufacturing."During the past year, Quiot Manufacturing had 30 percent more on-the-job accidents than at the nearby Panoply Industries plant, where the work shifts are one hour shorter 63
- claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate. 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 50
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppo 58
- The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead. 50
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...mitation of the governing authority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, as to, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58628841608 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34954167 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498817966903 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8795978622 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95833333333 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155469334263 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472519959631 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770328397742 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130264056061 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1257877423 0.0667264976115 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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