Arts is a innate talent, whoever has it should be known to the common people. Not everyone has a talent to portray his thought in the sense of art. There are very less number of Artiest in this world, and we support them in the best possible way.
In the initial state of an artist, artist need some financial support in order to succeed in the life. Not every artist is born in the rich family. Most of the artist are belong to the middle class of the family in the different part of the world. For instance, Mr Robin Hood from India. He is the great famous artist now. If we see the past, he belong to the middle class family of India. In his initial state of his carrier, he got a lot of support form the Indian government. He studied in the government school and completed his college degree as well. From his school days, Robin use to make different kind of inspiration painting, most of the Robin's painting devoted to Indian government message. Furthermore, after completing his studied, he became a full time painter and paint for the Indian government to reveal the hidden message in the form of painting.
Moreover, every artist need a small kind of help to start his carrier. Not everyone can be engineer and doctor, some should follow their passion and became full timer in their interest. Artist does not have limits and boundary, and they never belongs to one country. Artist works is being appreciated by all the people in this world. A good painting form Robin, can win a award and represent our nation. It's the proud moment for the whole nation. And Artist are well known by thier work through out the glob.
People who believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts, this may be true, If a artist is not sincere his work. For example, a person who is not interested in art but wanted to get the regular income that why asking from government to fund him. Once getting a fund, he lavishly spend the money on the luxuries thing. In this case, Government should have a regular check on this type of people. If we government stop funding them the talent will get wasted and it may come to an end.
In conclusion, Both kind of people are correct, but government has to come up with some solution to keep the check on the defaulter, and give the funding to real talent. To keep the art alive we need to support them
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...ee as well. From his school days, Robin use to make different kind of inspiration p...
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...reveal the hidden message in the form of painting. Moreover, every artist nee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50115473441 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28699923804 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4896073903 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7092158659 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1851851852 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.037037037 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81481481481 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233925328252 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601716854411 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082933287782 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144623379803 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989283484341 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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