Scandals shake society. While in retrospective scandals can be a good lesson for a complacent society, it would be too far to say that they focus our attention like no speaker could ever.
To add to this point, all revolutions in society are results of a livelong struggle of a great reformer. Nelson Mandella affected more to the freedom of South Africa than any scandals ever could. Although a corruption scandal of some white officials could provide some support to Mandela’s quest for freedom, the revolution would not be possible if there were no speakers or reformers to vanguard it.
Scandals of corruption, misuse of power by politicians, sexual harassment by a top personality are common headlines in the newspaper. But has all the unveiling of the scandals stopped it? Not even a scant. Furthermore, scandals make people pessimistic. But reformers and great speakers talk about hope. Their optimism is pervasive and people believe more. Most
However, there are some examples where all the great speakers were in no doubt of any wrong deeds but scandals unraveled it. Like, In the US general election in 2016, most voters, as well as civic societies, were the confidant of their democratic electoral process. When an ex-employee of Cambridge Analytica acted as a whistleblower, even the prominent speakers and democracy advocates where left at check. Similarly, websites like WikiLeaks have exposed scandals which a reformer or a speaker could never expose. Also, a businessman’s tax fraud scandal can make the lawmakers aware of the possible loopholes which businesses are using to exploit.
In conclusion, speakers and reformers are the chief impetus for addressing and solving the problems in society. However, this position cannot be endorsed without qualification. There are several instances where scandals foregrounded a heinous crime in a smug society.
- The following is a letter from the parent of a private school student to the principal of that school:Last year, Kensington Academy turned over management of its cafeteria to a private vendor, Swift Nutrition. This company serves low-fat, low-calorie meal 50
- "Medical experts say that only one-quarter of Corpora's citizens meet the current standards for adequate physical fitness, even though twenty years ago, one-half of all of Corpora's citizens met the standards as then defined. But these experts are mistake 72
- "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or dis 58
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 58
- dinosaurs are endotherms. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ng of the scandals stopped it? Not even a scant. Furthermore, scandals make people pess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 298.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35234899329 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01807722641 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8022126799 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9473684211 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233620387419 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623683412914 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595900242575 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128978317652 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052702447093 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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